A gesture
After getting up in the morning, finishing organizing the book bag, because today to participate in the secondary school examination, things must be checked to see if it is complete, in my zipper on the book bag when I heard the door of the opposite room suddenly opened, accompanied by a burst of rapid footsteps: "Daughter it, has not yet gone it!" It was dad who woke up, and he nervously asked mom. Suddenly, he saw me, all of a sudden became like a child, as if he had found a lost toy, excitedly stood in place, stretched out a thumb to me, "Daughter is the best!" I knew he was cheering me on, and I was going to respond to him coolly, but this time it felt different, it was my father's support for me. It wasn't until I said goodbye to my parents and looked downstairs to see both my mom and dad huddled in the door holding out four thumbs up for me. I smiled and set off with these two small support ......
A sentence
Arrived at the school, take advantage of a few minutes before the exam and then look at the book, every person in the class is reading seriously, while the teacher is sending out passes one by one, soon the teacher arrived next to my position, she urged me not to lose the The pass was carefully handed over to me while she urged me not to lose it, and then, patting me on the shoulder, she softly whispered in my ear, "Do your best! Be careful when you take the test." Thanks to my teacher's support, I took the words to heart, and I think I'll do my best to get good grades on the test.
A smile
The time came, the candidates began to walk separately to their own examination room, the same classmates walked together, we cheered each other, with a calm but nervous heart to face the first turn of life. At different stairways there are always a few people to say goodbye to, and now it is about to arrive at the test site where I am, nervousness began to haunt me, my good friend suddenly gave me a smile, suddenly the uneasiness in my heart was suddenly dissolved, a cool spring of water rushed into my heart, so that my heart calmed down, then the power of the classmates' smile to give me support. It was too late to marvel at its power, I also want to sincerely give her blessings and support, so I also smiled, to the person who gave me a smile, I hope this can also bring her support.
A gesture, a word, a smile, their power seems very small, but they will give the same great support, which gives immeasurable power. Remember, give support to others, even the smallest power is worth it!
Review:
Reading this article, I feel that the biggest advantages are two, one is to stick to the topic, the center is prominent. The author through the beginning of the prose sentence, and "sometimes only hidden in the unconscious, for me, even the smallest power is support" this sentence, open the door, directly highlighting the title of the key words "even the smallest," "support! The keyword "support" in the title is directly emphasized. The choice of material is only from the morning home to enter the examination room in this period of time in their own heart to experience the "even the smallest power" three small fragments, simple words everywhere conveyed the author can feel the powerful inner "support".
The second is to start from the details of life, the description is delicate. "A gesture, a word, a smile", such inconspicuous details, from parents, teachers, classmates to the author of the most powerful support and quantity, this force is the love of affection in the moisturizing, is the concern of the teacher's advice, is the transmission of friendship between classmates. These details enhance the emotional point of the article. For example, the article wrote "Mom and Dad both crowded in the door and stretched out four thumbs to me", from the "crowded" "stretching" this detail, we can easily appreciate, the author from these seemingly From the detail of "squeeze" and "stretch", we can easily realize that the writer has realized confidence, support and encouragement from these seemingly insignificant small supports. Exam essay, there is not enough time to embellish the article, so stick to the theme, highlight the center, the selection of typical material is a key to get a good score.