A.<<Journey to the West>> The author of <Journey to the West>> is Wu Cheng'en's former residence is located in the scenic Huai'an.
B. Enhancing awareness of the law and improving self-protection is necessary for the healthy growth of young people.
C. In the hot summer, mineral water such as Sprite, Wahaha and Nongfusanquan is one of the favorite summer drinks for candidates.
D. China's Everest mountaineering team succeeded in climbing Mount Everest because of the spirit of unity and cooperation of all the team members who braved the difficulties and dangers.
[A]A will be "<<Journey to the West>> the author of Wu Cheng'en" and "Wu Cheng'en's former residence is located in the beautiful scenery of Huai'an" two sentences mixed, should choose one of them. D. The word "reason" should be deleted for the misuse of related words. Answer: B
Example 2: The following sentences are free of speech defects ( )
A.The inactivated oil-emulsion vaccine for avian influenza has been used and developed by the School of Veterinary Medicine of the South China Agricultural University, and the immunization efficiency can reach 100 percent in laboratory tests.
B.After two wars in Afghanistan and Iraq, the United States has concluded that it can win a war without relying on large military bases.
C. The dominance of Harry Potter, the globally popular children's book, in China's children's book world has been knocked down this year with the launch of a full set of domestic animated children's book "The Legend of Nezha".
D.The National Development and Reform Commission recently issued a notice to drastically reduce the maximum retail prices of 24 commonly used medicines by an average of 30 percent, with price reductions amounting to about 3.5 billion yuan.
[Analysis] A. The word "use" and "develop" should be exchanged; B. The object center of the sentence is missing after the word "conclude", and the word "conclude" should be added at the end of the sentence. "D. The words "about" and "about" are repetitive. Answer: C
Example 3. There are two sick sentences in the following passage, please find them out and correct them. (2004.Nantong)
①Medical professionals and psychologists believe that some teenagers who have been obsessed with the Internet for a long time will suffer from a disease called "Internet addiction". ② The main symptoms of this disease are: mental dependence, teetotalism, memory loss and restlessness. ③Some parents do not realize that this is a disease and use simple and rough ways to stop their children from going online. ④For this reason, experts suggest that we should strengthen the regulation of the Internet and at the same time effectively look for ways to treat the disease.
Sentence 1, Revision:
Sentence 2, Revision:
[Analysis] Sentence 3, Revision: Negative: Delete "not" from "preventing children from accessing the Internet". Delete the word "not" in the phrase "prevent children from surfing the Internet". In the fourth sentence, the word order is inappropriate, and the word "effective" should be moved to the end of the sentence after the word "find".
Example 4: The following passage contains four speech defects, please choose two of them and correct them. (2004. Zhenjiang)
1) Albert Einstein was an outstanding scientist of the 20th century. ② He was born in Germany and later moved to the United States. As a scientific giant comparable to Isaac Newton, ③ he made significant contributions in many fields of physics, ④ the most important of which was the discovery of the "theory of relativity". The British physicist Thomson excitedly declared: ⑤ Einstein is "one of the greatest achievements in the history of human thought". 1921, ⑥ Einstein won the Nobel Prize in Physics.
The first part of the sentence should be changed to
The second part of the sentence should be changed to
[Ans] The first part of the sentence is inappropriate, and it should be changed to "Einstein was the most outstanding scientist of the 20th century", and the fourth part of the sentence, the fifth part of the sentence, and the sixth part of the sentence are inappropriate, and it should be changed to "The most important of these achievements was the creation of the theory of relativity". Einstein's theory of relativity is 'one of the greatest achievements in the history of human thought'", "Einstein won the Nobel Prize in Physics" (or "Einstein was honored with the Nobel Prize in Physics").
IV. Aptitude Test
1. The following sentence has no grammatical error ( ).
A.Peanuts in Shandong are the most productive province in the country.
B.Our school actively promotes curriculum reform and carries out a number of comprehensive practical activities, which are very popular among students.
C.According to the analysis of relevant experts, the drought that occurred in winter and spring this year is rare since the founding of the country.
D. "No gold is perfect, no one is perfect", and it is inevitable that anyone has no shortcomings.
2. The following sentence has no speech defects ( ）
A.The school party committee discussed mobilizing the whole school to carry out a patriotic hygiene campaign.
B.Xiao Li was confident that he could learn the computer well.
C. A survey showed that the number of young smokers under the age of 18 in a community was as high as 120 the year before, and after extensive publicity and education, it has dropped to 60 this year, which is being reduced by double.
D. Reform liberates the productive forces and releases the youthful vigor of a nation.
3. There is no language disease, the sentence meaning is clear one is ( )
A. Experts called for the elimination of two-stroke fuel-assisted vehicles as soon as possible is the urgent need of the current form.
B. The reporter went back to the school to interview many of Mr. Chen's deeds.
C. If serious reflection and exploration are carried out and double efforts are made, China's singing world will surely be able to get out of the doldrums and move towards a more solid prosperity.
D. Lu Xun attaches great importance to the literary and artistic creation of children and young people.
4.The following sentences have no speech defects ( )
A.Lao Wang accepted his colleague's advice and reported the staff member who showed favoritism.
B.Turning to the next summer, an unfortunate bad luck suddenly fell on the Gao family.
C. The new generation of products from our company has adopted a novel, beautiful and spiral shape in order to prevent counterfeiting; and to keep the high quality at a good price.
D. The city was awarded the title of "Provincial Water-saving City" after an expert group's assessment and acceptance.
5. The following sentence has no grammatical error ( )
A. The father gazed at his son from head to toe, so excited that his eyes filled with tears and he could not speak a word.
B.The classical ballet system, established over centuries, maximizes the skill, expressiveness and coordination of dance movements and develops the actor's physical strength and perception.
C. Beijing will work hard to improve the ecological environment to ensure the environmental quality required by the "Green Olympics" in Beijing.
D. He loves computers so much that he seems to have only a three-minute passion for everything else, except for locking himself up in his room and playing with the computer all day.
6. The following sentence can be changed in two different ways. (Each kind of modification can only change one place, not change the original meaning)
Recently, the relevant departments issued an urgent notice to strictly prohibit all hunting, selling and purchasing of civets and other wild animals.
Modify (1)
Modify (2)
7. There are two speech defects in the following passage, find them and correct them.
Emotion is the spiritual bond that regulates the relationship between teachers and students. Whether or not the content of education can be accepted depends to a large extent on the degree of rapport between teachers and students. ② teachers and students to maintain a pleasant and lively and harmonious atmosphere, ③ mutual respect, understanding, trust, the content of education in the emotional transmission belt can pass smoothly. ④Psychological research has shown that: ⑤The two-way exchange of healthy emotions between teachers and students, ⑥will make students feel from their teachers how a person should live, study and work.
The first part should be changed to
The second part should be changed to
8. The following is an extract from a poster in a bookstore, and there are two faults in its presentation. Please identify and correct them.
1) Our store has just received the latest book, The Righteous Among Us. ②The book is available in both hardcover and shortcover versions. ③The hardcover cover, illustrations and printing are well done, and ④the quality is excellent. ⑤ In order to communicate with readers and authors, ⑥ we have invited Zhou Meisen, a famous writer and author of the book, to come here to sign books. ⑦Location in the second floor of the literary works counter sale. ⑧ welcome readers to tell each other and participate.
The first place to change to
The first place to change to
Answers1、C 2、D 3、C 4、A 5、B
6、(1)去掉 "everything"（2)Add "的活动 "to the end of the sentence
7、(1) "Educational activities"
7. >7、①"Whether the content of education can be accepted depends largely on the degree of rapport between teachers and students." ④ "Psychological studies have shown"
8. ⑤ "To communicate between readers and writers" or "To facilitate contact between readers and writers" ⑦ " The location is at the literature counter on the second floor"