Yang Youmeng, senior two.
Green is the color of most plants when they grow well, and it is also the main color of most animals in nature, including human ancestors-apes. Although human beings have got rid of the situation that they must be attached to green in the long evolution, people who come from green can never leave green, especially a green and healthy life mentality.
Living with green thinking requires looking at everything around you with admiration and always being optimistic. Misfortune is the rudest guest. He never makes an appointment. He always comes unexpectedly when you feel happy, pulling you out of the hall of happiness and into the abyss of pain. When you meet this unreasonable guest, instead of crying in pain all day, it is better to laugh at the difficulties, take out a piece of paper and a pen, list what you still have, such as life, health and endless opportunities, and keep a green life mentality. Look at them with appreciation, and you will be delighted to find that you are not as poor as you think. On the contrary, you are still a small rich man! Even if you lose something, you can focus on things you didn't pay attention to before and try to praise them. Then a grass, a little flower and a comforting word from a friend can make you feel beautiful and lovely in your life.
Green plants can absorb carbon dioxide and harmful substances in the air under sunlight, convert them into organic substances needed for growth and purify the air. People who live with a green mind feel the true feelings of the world, and can also store the beauty in their own lives and the truth, goodness and beauty in the world in their hearts, turn them into beneficial nutrients, and nourish their own and others' hearts. If most people can live with a green mind, even if there are occasional false ugliness in the world, they will be melted by beautiful things and positive attitudes, which will pollute people's hearts and leave no trace. Such a society is a green society and a harmonious society.
Green life mentality also represents a positive attitude towards life. This year, the "* * door" has come and gone, celebrity scandals have spread frequently, and online celebrities such as Sister Furong and Sister Feng have appeared constantly, which has something to do with the fierce competition and fast-paced life in modern society, which makes people lose their green and healthy life mentality. In this case, it is particularly important to call for a green life mentality. If everyone has a healthy attitude, uses bright competition means and doesn't pry into the privacy of celebrities, these negative social phenomena will probably disappear, right?
I hope that the mentality of green life can stay in everyone's heart, so that everyone's living place is as harmonious and beautiful as nature.
[Comment by Yu Xuchu] 58 points (out of 70 points)
From the perspective of spiritual life, this paper expounds the importance of maintaining a healthy life mentality. The analogy between green plants and people's mentality in the second half is very realistic and enlightening. The language is simple and the level is clear. If the first paragraph is compressed, it will be better if the full-text sentence is more concise. =====================================
Sustainable life
Cai Yuwen Distinguished Teacher
(1963 college entrance examination, accepted by Chinese Department of Nanjing Normal University)
Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.
but ...
I have been to some places in Jiangsu. If you divide Jiangsu into three parts: southern Jiangsu, central Jiangsu and northern Jiangsu, you will find that from south to north, the green is getting stronger and stronger. In southern Jiangsu, you look at both sides in the carriage, building after building, village after village, development zone after development zone, and what you see are several farmland and green. There are many greens in central Jiangsu, but in northern Jiangsu, it is really a green world. There seem to be a lot fewer people here. There are no farmhouses in many places. Cauliflower, barley wave and Italian poplar jump into your field of vision. Green is in pieces, and green is at the top of the sky. The sky and water are also greener and bluer. This is really a green world. The embellishment of golden cauliflower adds a richness, which is called "vibrant and pleasing to the eye". But when it comes to economic development, it goes without saying that it is not directly proportional to the degree of green for the time being.
Zoom in a little more, and I can occasionally see a bamboo house in that high mountain and dense forest. Smoke rises and burns straw branches, and the "carbon emission" is extremely low. People undoubtedly live a "green life", but what about their situation? Narrow my horizon, I live in Xinjiekou area, where there are many tall buildings and green occasionally stands, but it is a famous commercial center in China and even the world, and the great Dr. Sun Yat-sen seems to like it here. Recently, the bronze statue of Mr. Sun returned to Xinjiekou Square. The bronze statue is ignorant and at the mercy of others, but at least it is rarely green and has not desecrated Mr. Zhongshan!
Some people will say, aren't developed countries also green homes? It's true. I haven't been to Europe and America, but I have been to Australia and New Zealand, where the sky is really green. Even better, there are rainbows in the sky on the boundless grass, which is rare here. The ecology there is really great. But all this is not difficult to understand: they are few, and the population density per square kilometer is only a few tenths of ours. If the population density is similar, I'm afraid there won't be so many green spaces, and grasslands will definitely become grain fields and residential areas!
I'm not against green life or "harmony between man and nature", but don't just emphasize green and ignore development, which is the last word. First of all, development sometimes destroys some green, which is inevitable. If green gives in, it will give in a little. Second, green itself also requires development, and it is necessary to scientifically preserve and change green, or improve the quality of green although there is a little less green. Green is not the darling of nature. It is said that Populus davidiana in northern Jiangsu is also an introduced tree species, which is a "development". Third, we must resolutely oppose "pseudo-green". I have indeed seen a straight mountain, full of thick green, but the wind blows and the branches and leaves do not shake. It turns out that green is poured on it. In food and other aspects, we should guard against the false name of "green" and harm others. In a word, scientific development is the first, everything is long-term, and the problem of development should also include the problem of green. Some westerners try to force you to reduce the "carbon emissions" of developing countries to what extent, in fact, they are trying to limit your development. Fortunately, we have always been vigilant.
Walking on the expressway in northern Jiangsu, I sometimes think that it seems that there is not much traffic on this road, and it is worthwhile to build an expressway on an area. But another thought, "To get rich, build roads first", lose a little green and build roads extending in all directions, just for the sake of great development. Northern Jiangsu has a bright future. Divide Jiangsu into three parts: southern Jiangsu, central Jiangsu and northern Jiangsu. I am not from Su Beiren, nor from southern Jiangsu, but from central Jiangsu. I am impartial. I wish all parts of southern Jiangsu, central Jiangsu and northern Jiangsu.
Score: 70 (full score 100)
This commentary does the opposite, discussing "green life" with the relationship between ecology and development. It has a strategic vision and hits the nail on the head. It is brilliant to "paint" meditation and anxiety with concrete feelings and feelings, and bring people into the author's thinking. The dilemma between ecology and development, the article tends to "develop", but strives to "moderate". If you write for college entrance examination, there is no doubt that you are the best. ============================================
Sustainable life
Wang Kuili
(Chinese teacher of Jinling Middle School, 1977 took the college entrance examination and was admitted to Yangzhou Normal University)
After 30 years of reform and opening up, almost all the people in the country have benefited. Television, black and white for color; Communicate, write letters and exchange emails; Calling, the mobile phone changed to 3 G, but after 30 years of teaching reform, students benefited little. The schoolbag is still so heavy, even heavier; There are so many papers, even more; The topic is still so difficult, even more difficult. Students still live in "hot water" like their parents when they were students. I can't help asking: When will our children have a green student life?
The so-called "green student life" is a life that conforms to the law of students' physical and mental development, a life that is conducive to students' success, a life that is conducive to students' sustainable development, and, in a sense, a life that is conducive to the sustainable development of our nation. This kind of student life, it shouldn't just be burdened with parents' unfulfilled dreams since childhood, shuttling between various remedial classes, accepting model-oriented exam-oriented education around exams, making various papers, and finally making a lifelong commitment with one paper, because it is difficult to cultivate a new generation of people who are physically and mentally healthy, creative and have Nobel Prize masters. "Green student life" should take into account students' hobbies, diversified development needs and ample room for growth. It should be lively, colorful and full of vitality. In a word, it should be "green". Instead of the present situation, teachers and students have been thinking about the entrance examination papers since grade and are fighting for the future papers. Gradually, the edges and corners of the students are gone, the spirit is gone, and the gas field is gone. It is said that students are the future of the nation. Please give them a "green student life"!
People say that the United States and other western countries are advanced and envy their prosperity and development. But few people really study and learn other people's advanced education and teaching ideas. In recent years, although some people with lofty ideals have introduced some new ideas and new teaching models, it seems that these new things are not used to entering China, and soon they have "China characteristics". A few years ago, "quality education" was vigorously carried out for a while, and finally it was given up; In recent years, new curriculum standards are being implemented. I really hope that the new curriculum standard will never change its form. I really hope it can really reduce students' heavy academic burden, give children a "green student life", give students a green space for free development, and let them grow up healthily and study happily. Our children are really suffering! Don't you find that some students' glasses are "increasing day by day" because they study too long? Have you found that some students are depressed and autistic because of psychological barriers? Don't you see that some students end their youth early because of too much pressure?
Of course, giving students a green study life is not only a matter for educators, but also a matter for the whole society and the whole country. Our people should understand that not every child can win the future Nobel Prize through hard work, and society needs more than just Nobel Prize winners. Talents should be diverse, and never use a mold to demand and cultivate our ever-changing children.
In a word, as a person who is over 500 years old, I really earnestly hope that our students' lives will be less "gray" and more "green" as soon as possible. I really hope that our education can develop as fast as GDP. I really earnestly hope that our children will have both ordinary soldiers with lush green grass and Einstein-style generous families like towering trees in the future. Great people should be born from great nations.
Score: 67 points
The commentary adds the definition of "green life" to "students" and becomes the thinking of "ecological education", which is a good way to concretize this somewhat vague topic. When it comes to student life, the author starts with the topic of "green". Everything is right, but it doesn't seem to hit the point. The home of composition model essay: