I. Improper Collocation
1. Improper Collocation of Subject and Predicate
Example 1: His kind smile and kindly teaching appeared in front of my eyes all the time.
The cause of this sentence is that the subject-verb collocation is improper, the subject center word "teaching" and the predicate center word "appeared" do not match. Delete the phrase "taught in a good way" and you'll be fine.
2. Incompatible verb-object agreement
Example 2: We visited this school to learn about the experience of Heroes.
The cause of this sentence is the improper collocation of verb-object, the center of the predicate "visit" and the center of the object "experience" do not go together. The word "visit" can be changed to "learn".
3. Inappropriate subject-object combination
Example 3: Jinan is sunny and cloudless in winter.
The cause of this sentence is that the subject and object of the sentence do not go together, and the subject and object of the sentence do not go together. The word "Jinan" should be replaced by "Jinan's winter".
4. Inappropriate combination of modifier and center word
Example 4: He has spent a lot of effort on breeding hybrid rice.
The cause of this sentence is that the modifier does not match the center word. The modifier "great" does not match the center word "effort". Replace "a great deal" with "a lot".
5. Inappropriate matching of related words
Example 5: My brother is not only thin, but also full of energy.
The cause of this sentence is the improper matching of related words. Replace "not only ...... but ......" with "although ...... but ......" will suffice.
6. Two sides of the coin
Example 6: The success of a lesson is measured by its ability to develop students' thinking skills.
The cause of this sentence is the improper combination of two sides and one side. "Can" contains two aspects, while "success" contains only one. The word "whether" should be added before "success".
Second: Compositional mutilation
1. Lack of subject
Example 7: The discussion made us more determined.
The cause of this sentence is the lack of a subject. Delete the word "made".
2. Lack of Predicate
Example 8: Spring has come to the flowers and trees on the campus.
The cause of this sentence is the lack of predicate. Just add "vibrant" at the end of the sentence.
3. Lack of object
Example 9: We should cultivate honesty and trustworthiness from childhood.
The cause of this sentence is the lack of an object. Add "the virtue of" at the end of the sentence.
Third, the components are superfluous
1. Repetition is superfluous
Example 10: We must come up with our own genuine computer software, otherwise, if we can't come up with new software, it will be difficult for us to resist the unhealthy pirated software.
The cause of this sentence is repetition and redundancy. The words "or else" and "fail to produce new software" are repetitive, and one should be taken over the other.
Example 11: Only through close contact with the society and the masses can we offer insightful advice on the safety of the country and the concerns of the people.
The cause of this sentence is repetition and redundancy. The words "insights" and "opinions" are repeated.
2. Negative redundancy
Example 12: We should follow the rules of the road so that there are no accidents.
The cause of this sentence is negative redundancy. Some words, such as "prohibit", "prevent", "avoid", "avoid", etc., are themselves redundant. to avoid" and other words, itself has "try to prevent" the meaning of its can not be used after the negative, otherwise, will change the original meaning of the sentence. If you want to change the meaning of the sentence, you can delete the word "not".
Example 13: We cannot deny that the sun does not rise in the east and set in the west.
The cause of this sentence is the redundancy of negation. The double negative "can't help but admit" means yes, and then the negative word "not" is added after it, so the whole sentence ends up in the negative. To amend the sentence, delete "not".
3. Approximate redundancy
Example 14: The economic losses caused by the fire, according to conservative estimates by the relevant departments, the direct losses are at least 40 million yuan.
The cause of this sentence is approximate redundancy. "minimum". When revising, only one of the words "at least" and "more than" is acceptable.
Four, in the examination questions in the other commonly tested error-prone sentence type comb
1. improper order
Example 15: This question is very impressive to me.
The cause of this sentence is inappropriate word order. It should be changed to "I was very impressed by the question".
2. Structural Confusion
The shepherd boy led the cow to graze on the hillside.
Analysis: "Leading" and "eating" are not from the same subject and should not be written as a single sentence.
3Understanding Ambiguity
The table was covered with birthday presents from many friends.
(1) There were many presents on the table from friends.
(2) The table held gifts that were sent by many friends.
The Complete Sentence Revision Training for Middle School Language
1. The following sentences have no speech defects (3 points) ( )
A. No matter what kind of difficulties the workers encountered during the construction of the Three Gorges Dam, they were able to fight through all the thorns and go forward. )
B．Edison's wish to sell newspapers while conducting experiments on the train was dashed by the conductor's rude interference.
C．The Chinese Disabled People's Art Troupe performed a large-scale music and dance show "My Dream" in Hong Kong, which was warmly welcomed by the audience.
D．In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, city leaders have asked all units to further strengthen their management and formulate strict preventive measures.
2．The following sentence has no grammatical error (3 points) ( )
A．White-clothed angels are fighting on the front line of the fight against SARS, and their touching deeds and spirit of sacrifice are spreading in the hearts of the people.
B．In the process of reading literary masterpieces, it makes me understand a lot of truths about being a human being． I have realized the true meaning of life．
C．We should live in harmony with nature and protect our own home, the earth.
D．The sound of the cicadas in the morning light is very special and light, seems to be far away, seems to be near, seems to be far away, and seems to have nothing.
3. In the following sentences, the one that has no grammatical disease is (3 points) ( )
A. The construction of Beishan Mountain into a provincial forest park is an important project of the local government to implement sustainable development.
B．The annual power generated by the power station is supplied for use in Hangzhou, but also sent to Shanghai and Nanjing.
C．Self-written and self-performed textbook plays are useful in developing personalities and guiding students to read famous books.
D．The street hopes to vigorously carry out legal education through various channels to prevent young people from breaking the law.
4．The one of the following sentences without speech defects is (3 points) ( )
A．Practice has proved that the amount of one's knowledge and the size of one's achievements. The key lies in the degree of diligence.
B．The reporter went to the school again and interviewed many of Mr. Zhang's deeds.
C．At present, the literacy of the Chinese people is generally low and needs to be greatly improved.
D．The performance of the Chinese men's soccer team makes us realize the importance of good mental quality.
5．The following expressions are correct (3 marks) ( )
A. A victim in a blazing fire cries for help.
B. The activity was carried out to raise the culture of protecting the environment in the whole society.
C．The highway was heaving with cars coming from south to north.
D．My hometown is the place where I was born and raised, and my folks treat me with great kindness.
6. The revision of the following sentences, the error is (3 points) ( )
A. Xiao Ming changed the habit of sleeping in the morning. (Replace "变化" with "改变")
B．When I walked to the farmers' market, I saw a bustling scene. (Delete "when" and "when")
C．There was a thick stack of botanical specimens on the table in the exhibition room. (Put "thick" after "placed")
D．The first thing I saw when I entered the classroom was a very large map. (Reverse the words "a" and "very large")
7. Revise the following sentences. (4 points)
①The teacher has been really sleepless and thoughtful in order to train us.
②Yang Lin's language achievement is not only outstanding in the whole school, but also in the top of my class.
8. The following sentence can be changed in two different ways. (Each modification can only change one place, and the original meaning must not be changed.) (4 points)
Recently, the relevant departments have issued an urgent notice to strictly prohibit all hunting, selling and buying of civets and other wild animals. Modify ①
Modify ②
9. Read the language and find the sick sentences. Find the sick sentences in the following text and correct them. (5 points)
①The advance company of this troop then hastily occupied a very low bare hillock by the automobile road to block the enemy, and a magnificent struggle began. ("Who is the loveliest person")
② Under the care of the Party and the government, rural education in China has fundamentally improved, and the conditions of schooling in rural areas have been greatly improved, and the quality of education and teaching facilities have improved greatly. ("Not One Less")
③The doors and windows in Suzhou Gardens, pattern design and carving work are the top of the arts and crafts. ("Suzhou Gardens")
④Under this serious supervision, mongrels also have a hard time. ("Kong Yi Ji")
5Let the laborers walk the streets at a wide pace! ("Notice of the Dawn")
10．The following sentence has no grammatical error (3 marks) ( )
A．Can it be denied that our opinion is incorrect?
B．The exact details about the matter will be told later.
C．In order to do a good job, we have to be open-minded and widely consult the public.
D．The sound of light rain makes me feel gentle, still and peaceful.
11．The following underlined sentence, the improper one is (4 points) ( )
I y realize: ①To learn to do a good job, whether or not to listen carefully is the key. ② Only by concentrating in class, you can grasp the key points and break through the difficult ones. ③ Before, sometimes the teacher said to what place do not know, I often engage in small movements in class, the thought of desertion. ④Being in the classroom and having my mind on the playground, I might not learn my homework well.
A．Delete "whether" in the first sentence．B．Change "on" to "only"
C．The words "thought of desertion" and "desertion" in the third sentence． "D. In the fourth sentence, the word "may" has been changed to "must"
12. Revise the following sentences. (6 points)
①Recently, a new kind of anti-SARS drug called the attention of many visitors at the Beijing International Science and Technology Industry Fair.
②Increasing the quality is an urgent task in the reform of language teaching.
③After listening to the report of the hero's deeds, everyone's heart could not be calmed for a long time.
④Journalists should create an upbeat, united and innovative atmosphere for the victory of the 16th National Congress of the Communist Party of China (CPC).
⑤Pingtan beach water is warm and clean, the waves are gentle, is a natural seawater bath.
6 In order to prevent a major disaster from being followed by a major epidemic, the medical staff of a ministry in Hubei inspected day and night, eating and living on the embankment.
13. The following sentence has no speech defects (4 points) ( )
A. In order to prevent this kind of accident from happening again, we must take effective measures.
B．The failure of the college entrance examination saddened Xiaojing, and how he wished that a close friend would share this infinite anguish with him!
C．Since coming into this world, human beings have been facing two kinds of challenges, one from human beings themselves and the other from nature.
D．Candidates are concentrating on their answers in the examination room, while teachers and parents outside the room are waiting anxiously all the time.
14．The following passage has three sentences, each with a speech defect. (6 points)
①The Beijing Organizing Committee for the Olympic Games recently held a press conference to announce the first call for songs for the Olympic Games from April 15 this year. ② The collection will be held for five consecutive sessions, each session of the evaluation of 10 songs into the Beijing Olympic Games theme song candidate songs. These candidate songs are widely sung by people from all walks of life. Finally identified a fully embodied the Chinese cultural characteristics and Olympic spirit of the song, the Spirit of the Olympic Games theme song in this?008.
○1 ○2 ○3
15. Read the following passage and revise the sentences. (标明序号并写出修改后的句子)(6分)
①One of the advantages of keeping a diary is that you can leave behind bits and pieces of your own growing up. ②I have kept the habit of keeping a diary for eight years. ③The thick pile of diaries is my treasure. ④Occasionally I look through my old diary, ⑤I have a lot of feelings. ⑥ Although there is no lack of disease-free moaning in the diary, ⑦. There are a lot of arrogant long-winded, ⑧ and more is the feeling of ordinary life, ⑨ on the self-reflection and encouragement.
A． B． C．
19．The following is Xiaoming's classmates said to him on the phone in a paragraph, plus the part of the cross-hairs have speech defects,
Some of the expression of inappropriate, please modify. (6 points)
Small Ming, ①You'd better write an article for the "Young Forest Literature Club" in preparation for the upcoming school festival! There is no limit to the genre, poetry, prose and sketches. Please encourage your classmates to submit articles. As you can see, ten students in my class, including me, have already submitted their essays. You can hand in your drafts directly to me, and I'll give you a few pointers. ④Please note that the deadline for submission is the end of this month.
Answer: ① ② ③ ④
Read the following passage and complete questions 20-22.
Lakes and mountains, the scent of flowers and the murmur of streams are all the sprites of the universe, and are the most beautiful articles and music that nature has enriched to people. But these articles and music is not everyone can read and understand. Some people, spring ding dong, in his hearing is nature played the wonderful and kai music; the sky of the white clouds, in his view is nature laid the most beautiful and best picture;, . And some people, in the face of the beauty of nature, hear only the sound, color, such a person is unable to appreciate the interest of nature.
20. There are two misspellings in the passage, please find them and correct them. (2分)
①错别字：改正： ②错别字： corrected:
21．There is a sick sentence in this passage, please draw it out in the text with " " and write the revised sentence below. (2 points)
22. According to the rhetorical techniques used in the underlined sentence in the article, write a sentence on the horizontal line below so that it forms a prose sentence with the preceding one. (3 points)
Make changes and additions to the following illustrative passage.
①The rat, known in zoology as Mammalia, is now more than 2,500 species in the world, and ②there are 30 billion of them, more than five times the world's total population. From the point of view of animal evolution, it is older than man. ③ Their ability to adapt to the environment is very strong, from the equator to the poles have their traces, human beings only two or three million years of history, while the rat has at least 40 or 50 million years of history. It is the Greek water temperature of up to 90 degrees Celsius Vikula hot springs also live in a strange scalding rats, even if placed in boiling water, ④ it is still floating up and down, east and west, jumping up and down.
Rats are very harmful to human beings, in addition to the food, damage to the environment, or the spread of the plague is the main culprit. Therefore, people often use idioms containing the word "rat", such as ⑤, to express their disgust for it.
23. There are four mistakes in the text. (8 points)
① ② ③ ④
24. The idiom that can be added at ⑤ is . (1 point)
25. Choose a sentence without any speech defects. (3 points) ( )
A．Reading a lot of good literature can not only increase one's knowledge but also enrich one's feelings.
B．At present, the quantity and quality of talents in all aspects in China cannot meet the economic and social development.
C．The experimental middle school actively promotes curriculum reform and carries out a number of comprehensive practical activities, which are very popular among students.
D．Jiangnan Pharmaceutical Group has taken active and effective water conservation measures, and its water consumption has dropped three times from forty tons in the same period last year to ten tons now.
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2. C 3. C 4. A 5. A 7. A
8. D (A "victims" can not "call for help", contradiction, B "raise "can not be with the" ethos "with", item c "gushing" is not the right word) 9. D (should be the "first sight" and D (should be "first glance" and "see" switch)
10. ① remove the "deliberate" or changed to "broken hearted", "blood and sweat ①Remove the word "deliberate" or change it to "painstaking" or "devoted". ②It is not only in the top of my class, but also in the whole school (or: switch the words "the whole school" and "my class").
11. ① Remove "everything" ② Add "the behavior of" after "wild animals".
12. ① "magnificent" is a positive word, and the fight for both sides, so it will be changed to "fierce" ② "teaching facilities" should be "improve...'improve" and other words, not "improve" ③ "work" does not belong to the fine arts, should be deleted ④ "work" does not belong to the fine arts, should be deleted. It should be deleted. ④ "Serious" is inappropriate to modify "supervision", and should be changed to "severe". ⑤ "Broad" cannot modify "pace". ⑤ "Broad" can not modify "pace", should be changed to "steady" 13. D (A more negative words, B preposition "specific" and "detailed" repeated, c preposition "specific" and "detailed" repeated, c). D (A more negative words, B prepositions "specific" and "detailed" repeated, c "modestly accept" and "widely solicited" should be switched) 14. C 15. ① "call to" changed to "attract" ② "increase" changed to "improve" ③ "long time" " long time" retain a ④Add "the atmosphere of public opinion" at the end ⑤Interchange "natural" with "~ a" ⑥ "The word "prevent" should be changed to "do."
16 . B. "Share" and "distress" do not go well together; D. "All" after "all the time" should be D. The word "all" after "all the time" should be changed to "no")
17. " ② improper collocation, "into" to "as" ③ word order is not appropriate, "widely" moved to "singing "
18. A. ② I keep the habit of writing a diary for eight years or I keep the habit of writing a diary for nearly eight years
B. ④ Occasionally look through the old diary C. ⑧ But it is more of a feeling of ordinary life
19. ①Delete the words "about to" and "right away"
②Replace the words "including me" with the words "our class". "
3. It is not appropriate to read "please ask the teacher to enlighten me" or "we **** together to deliberate"
④. The deadline for submission is the end of this month" or "The deadline for submission is the end of this month."
20. ①Fu-Fu ②Kai-Harmony
21. "All you hear are sounds and colors. " is changed to: hear only sounds, see only colors.
22. Example: green hills and green water, in his reading is a wonderful and wonderful landscape poem written by nature.
23. ① Change "called" to "belong to"
② Add "about (approximately)" before "there are 30 billion of them". ", or change "there are 30 billion" to "there are more than 30 billion", or change "there are 30 billion" to "There are 30 billion or so"
③Switch the order of words, will be "human beings only ......, ...... history now. " Switch to "They ......, ...... traces." Before.
④Delete "jumping up and down" or "floating up and down". 24. rat-eyed (贼眉鼠眼等) 25. a 1. b