The Moonlight in a Lotus Pond lesson plan for the first book of the first year of high school

"Moonlight in a Lotus Pond" is a landscape prose, but also a lyrical prose, the author of the simple, elegant, poetic language will describe the lotus pond and description of the moon color cleverly combined, highlighting the elegant, hazy, quiet beauty of the scene, in the writing of the scene, expressing a light sadness and a light joy. Students are easy into the scene, but into the feelings that is difficult, and the language and scenery level of subtlety is difficult to understand, so in teaching the first detailed description of the writing of the article of the time situation and the author of the complex state of mind, so that the students through the association of historical imagery, and then closely linked to the author of the change in emotion to speculate on the use of language and the beauty of the mood. The following is for you to share the humanist version of the first book of the first year of high school, "Moonlight in a Lotus Pond" lesson plan, for your reference and reference, welcome to browse!

I. Teaching Objectives

1, to understand the author's thoughts and feelings;

2, to learn the author's skills in the use of language

Second, the focus of the teaching

1, combined with the context of the speculation of the meaning of the words, phrases, and the taste of the work of language

2. To realize the beauty of the integration of scenic and emotional language.

Third, the teaching process

Before class: ① students consult the information about the background of the era;

② students carefully read the article, seriously think about the teacher assigned reading training questions.

Classroom: ① Discuss the reading training questions in small groups (one class period)

② Combine the reading training questions with the order of writing of the article (two class periods)

After class: ① Organize the class notes

② Do the relevant questions in the Creative Thinking Training in a limited time

③ Imitation: write a paragraph of writing about a scene after the boomerang of the fourth natural paragraph of the text

Fourth, the teaching process

Reading training materials

These days the heart is quite unsettled. （The reason for this is that it's not a good idea to have a good time, but it's a good idea to have a good time. (Analysis: After the failure of the Revolution in 1927, the author was at a loss, hoping to find relief in a quiet environment but could not do so.) Tonight, sitting in the courtyard, suddenly remembered that the day walk through the lotus pond, in the light of the full moon, it should be a different look. The moon gradually (If the word gradually is omitted, what is the difference in the effect of expression? Analysis: gradually written out of the flow of time and the slow transfer of space, and the quiet of the environment and the state of mind is not quiet, if omitted, can not portray the mobility of time and space change, but also can not reflect the slow serenity and serenity in the quiet of the quiet of the quiet of the quiet) rises, the wall of the road on the children's laughter, has been inaudible; wife in the house patting the intercalary, humming a sleepy song in a daze. I quietly put on my big shirt and brought (What is the difference if the word bring is replaced by cover or shut? Analysis: cover the door/turn/pull cover, the action is cumbersome, there is a certain purpose; off the action process is similar to cover, purposeful, the emotional color of the language is flat and pale, lack of expressiveness; with gently cover the door from the back, the action is gentle and casual, to keep the environment quiet, but also with the state of mind in line with the) out of the door.

(1) In this natural paragraph, the author of the environment is composed of which several spaces in three dimensions? (Analyze: the yard, the night sky, outside the wall, the house, outside the door)

(2, in this natural paragraph, the author used which superlatives? What is the purpose? Analysis: day by day, gradually, confused, quietly; this article uses the superlative not only describes the scene in front of you, but also has a rhythmic beauty. (Superimposed words are usually read in a soft tone, and the soft tone matches the soft scene, which can render an elegant but not vulgar language atmosphere, and in the prolongation of speech, the semantics and emotions are also endless and evocative.)

Along (why don't you use leading to?). (Analysis: Along is around, before you can see the scenery of the four sides of the lotus pond, and leading to means still walking on the road to the lotus pond, no way to get to see the four sides of the lotus pond.) The lotus pond is a small, winding, coal-chip road. It is a secluded road; few people walk along it even in the daytime, and it is even lonelier at night. (What is the connection between zigzag, seclusion and loneliness? (Analysis: Twists and turns lead to seclusion, seclusion leads to loneliness.) On all sides of the lotus pond, there are many trees growing luxuriantly. On the side of the road were some willows and some trees whose names I did not know. On nights when there is no moonlight, the road is eerie and a bit scary. Tonight, however, it was fine, although the moonlight was still pale as well. (What superlatives does the author use to describe the scene? Analysis: luxuriant, gloomy, pale; what is the tone of the scene? (Analyze: pale; what kind of mood is revealed?

Analysis: faint sadness.)

I was the only one on the road, pacing with my hands behind my back. (What is the difference in expression if the word walk is replaced by walk? Analysis: pacing: walking not slow, not panic, slow and orderly, footsteps in order, but the heart is thinking, if there is a feeling, in the leisurely, transcendent, faint sorrow in the hidden. (If you replace the word walk, you will lack the charm of the fusion of scenes.) This piece of heaven and earth seems to be mine; I also seem to be beyond my usual self, (link the context to understand how my usual self is like? What is my present self like? (Analyze: bitter, uncertain, wanting to escape but difficult to transcend; free man) to another world. I love to be lively and calm, to live in a group and to be alone. Like tonight, alone under the pale moon, I can think of anything, I can think of nothing, I feel free. The things I must do and say in the daytime can now be ignored. This is the wonderful thing about being alone, and I am used to it. (What changes in the author's mood can be indicated by the words "wonderful" and "used to"? (Analysis: from light sorrow to light joy) This boundless lotus and moonlight is good. (What is the function of the last sentence of this natural paragraph in the context? (Analysis: a transitional sentence that carries on the previous and starts the next)

Above the curved and twisted lotus ponds, the view is all over the place (what is the meaning of "all over the place"?).

Above the curved lotus pond, the field of leaves is full of vision, full of eyes, like the spring colors. Leaves out of the water is very high, like Tingting (Tingting with the previous word echo, it modifies the dancer or skirt? (Analysis: It echoes with high and modifies the dancer's skirt) of the dancer's skirt. (This sentence utilizes the rhetoric of simile, what are the ontology and the metaphor? What are the similarities between them? (Analysis: the ontology is leaves; the metaphor is the skirt of the dancer of the pavilion; the skirt of the dancer is similar to the natural spreading form of the leaves.) In the middle of the cascading leaves, (Field and cascade are specific explanations of which of the preceding words? Why? (Analyze: zigzag; the fields describe their uninterruptedness, and the layers describe their orderly heights), sporadically dotted (dotted is a specific interpretation of which word?) with some leaves. (Analysis: sporadic) with some white flowers, some curly blooming, some shyly dozing; (This sentence uses which rhetorical device? Would it be better to use other rhetorical devices? (Which rhetorical device is used in this sentence? Analysis: anthropomorphism; can not be replaced with other rhetorical devices, because the use of anthropomorphism can respond to the above dancers, lotus stems like dancers, leaves like dancers skirt, and the flowers will be like the dancers face, the same variety of forms, Chu Chu touching) as a grain of pearl, and as the stars in the blue sky, and as the beauty of the just out of the bath. (This sentence uses a metaphorical rhetorical pattern, what are the body and the metaphor? What are the similarities between them? Analysis: the body of the white flower; the metaphor of a grain of pearl, the stars in the blue sky, just out of the bath of beauty.

1, the lotus under the moon white and bright, and is sporadically dotted, and a grain of pearl similar; 2, white flowers dotted in the middle of the layers of leaves, in the green bushes vaguely twinkling, and the stars in the blue sky similar; 3, the lotus is curly, shy and is white and bright, its demeanor and color are similar to the beauty of the just out of the bath) breeze, send a wisp of fragrance, as if the distant tall buildings remote singing. (The breeze is sending a fragrance, as if it were a faint singing voice on a high building in the distance. (Here, the method of writing scenery is utilized, try to describe what is generic? What is its most important feature? What is the similarity between the fragrance and the distant singing on the high building? What is the purpose of this description? Analyze: The sense of empathy refers to the way in which one sense transcends its own limitations and apprehends the impressions belonging to another sense, that is, the way in which one sensible image is transformed into another sensible image. Its most characteristic feature is the transfer of sensation. Similarity: intermittent, if any, elusive. Function: The song is more genuine and novel than the fragrance of the lotus. The fragrance of the lotus is an olfactory sensible image, but the author compares it to the remote singing on a high building in the distance, so that it is transformed into an auditory image, intertwining the senses of sight, smell, and hearing, and enlightening the readers to more far-reaching imaginations and associations.) At this time the leaves and flowers also have a slight tremor, (What is the reason for the tremor? Analysis: the breeze) like lightning, and in a flash it traveled across the other side of the lotus pond. The leaves were side by side and close together, and there was a (why only one and not several?). Analysis: a flicker, like a flash of lightning) condensed blue wave marks. (Why are the ripples of solid turquoise? (Analysis: fields, layers, shoulder-to-shoulder, densely next to each other.) Underneath the leaves are veins (What characterizes the flowing water?). (Analysis: silent, implicit) of the flowing water, covered, can not see some color; while the leaves are more to see the wind.

(the order of the scene written in this paragraph can not be mobilized? Analysis: no. Because the leaves out of the water is very high, and is a field, as far as the eye can see is certainly the first leaves; because the white flowers are dotted between, and white and shiny, so then write the flowers is a matter of course; because the flowers are sporadic, so the breeze has a fragrance; because there is a breeze, there is a trace of the wave; because there is a trace of the wave, then see the bottom of the water; because of the water, so the leaves are more windy. The author's eyes return to the leaves and flowers, thus logically and unhurriedly leading to the following description of the moonlight that quietly cascades over the leaves and flowers. (The order in which the scenes appear is strongly related, extremely layered, and can never be mobilized.)

The moonlight, like running water, quietly cascades (if the word "cascade" is used, what is the difference in the effect of the expression? Analysis: diarrhea indicates that the moon is in the middle of the sky, the moonlight from the top down, there is a stronger sense of movement and three-dimensional sense; trickle although there is also the meaning of flowing down, but generally is expressed in the water, tears or sweat, etc. along with or attached to a certain flow down, and the moonlight is from the air down, and does not attach to any thing.) On this leaf and flower. The thin green mist floats (What is the difference in the effect of expression if it is replaced by floating? Analysis: floating depicts the green fog and leaves and flowers both close to each other and reflect each other if that is the sense of hierarchy and movement, but also depicts the green fog seems to be moving and quiet, seems to be static and moving the soft and implicit state; floating although with thin echo, but both floating will be scattered, will escape, although there is a soft state and no implicit static smiling beauty, and the reason why the fog is green is because of the fog close to the field, the dense foliage and become, floating high, floating far away, there is no sense of green.) The leaves and flowers seem to be in a cow's milky way. The leaves and flowers seem to be washed in buttermilk; they are like a dream covered with a light veil. (What is the essence of buttermilk and veil? What is the essence of a dream? (Analysis: thin green mist; leaves and flowers) Although it was a full moon, there was a layer of light clouds in the sky, so it could not shine; but I thought it was just the right time for a sound sleep, which is indispensable, and a nap, which also has a special flavor. The moonlight shone through the trees, and the bushes, which were clumped high above, fell in mottled black shadows that were as craggy as ghosts; and the sparse shadows of the curving willows looked like they had been painted on the lotus leaves. (What characteristics of the shadows of which two trees are described in this sentence? What is the role of the word "painting" in showing these characteristics? (Analysis: the mottled dark shadows of the shrubs; the sparse shadows of the willows; the painting shows that the staggering of the shadows, the harmony of the shade is just right, like from the hand of a famous painter, and makes it easier for the readers to associate and imagine the poetic mood of the moonlight in the lotus pond.) The moonlight in the pond is not uniform; but the light and the shadows have a harmonic melody, such as the famous song played on the Van Shapely Ling. (This sentence utilizes the rhetorical devices of simile and metaphor; what are the ontology and the metaphor? What are the similarities between them? From which two senses are they transferred to each other? (Analysis: ontology moon color; metaphor famous song; similarity: harmony; it is the interchange of vision and hearing.)

(Comment: This paragraph writes about the moonlight on the lotus pond, there are positive descriptions, such as running water, diarrhea; there are also scenes for counterpoint, such as writing about the green mist, leaves and flowers, dark shadows and shadows, and so on; write the light and shadow, although uneven, but harmonious as the famous song, the light and the shadow into a single entity, the lotus pond and the moonlight into a single entity, the state of mind and the physical scenery into a single entity, the whole heaven and earth is one and the same, as a dream like a phantasmagoria, like a poem like a painting, so that the author and the reader are enchanted. (The reader is mesmerized, and the author's heart is still filled with faint joy.)

The four sides of the pond, near and far, high and low are trees, (near and far, high and low to describe the characteristics of the trees? (Analysis: continuous piece, high and low staggered, hierarchical) and the most willows. These trees surrounded a lotus pond; only on the side of the path, there were a few gaps, as if specially left for the moonlight. The color of the trees is cloudy, at first glance like a cloud of smoke; but the willow's beauty, even in the smoke can be identified. (In the overall writing of the tree and focus on the willow's appearance, what kind of writing style is this? (Analysis: combination of point and surface) The tops of the trees are a band of distant mountains, but only some of the general idea. In the cracks of the trees are also leaking one or two points of street light, listless, is thirsty for sleeper's eyes. At this time of the year, the most lively is the sound of cicadas in the trees and frogs in the water; but the lively is theirs, I have nothing. (How did the author write from scenery to people? What has changed in the author's mind? Analysis: by the street lights associated with the human eye, by the human eye will naturally be associated with the human heart, the thought of a person, the lively sound of cicadas and frogs will naturally disturb the lotus pond and the author's inner transcendent realm, the author finally issued a lively is theirs, I have nothing of the lament. The author's mind again from light joy to light sadness.)

Suddenly remembered the lotus picking. (Why did the author suddenly remember the lotus picking

? (Analysis: the rather uneasy mood in the dreamlike lotus pond shore did not get discharged, want to * to the ancient lotus picking scene of yearning and nostalgia for the hometown to relieve.) Lotus picking is an old custom in Jiangnan, which seems to have existed long ago and flourished during the Six Dynasties; you can roughly know it from the poem. The lotus-pickers were teenage women who went in small boats and sang colorful songs. It goes without saying that there were many lotus pickers, and there were also people who watched the picking. It was a lively season and a season of flirtation. Liang Yuan Di "lotus picking fugue" said well:

So the demon girl, swinging boat heart Xu; prow Xu head back, and pass the feather cup; paddle will be moved and algae hanging, the boat wants to move and Ping open.

It can be seen that the light of the playground. This is really interesting, but it is a pity that we have long been unable to enjoy it now. (The author touches the scene, by the scene in front of the scene associated with the scene of picking lotus in Jiangnan, the author said that this is a lively and flirtatious season, and cited Emperor Liang Yuan Di's "picking lotus fugue" describing the playful scene at that time, the author has not been infected by this scene? Which sentence in the article can indicate this? Analysis: No. (Unfortunately, now we have long been unable to enjoy it, still the hustle and bustle is theirs, and I have nothing)

Then I remembered the sentence in the West Island Song:

Picking Lotus in the Nantang Autumn, Lotus over the head of the people; lowering his head to get the lotus seed, the seed of the lotus is as clear as water.

(The West Island Song was originally used to describe the pain of a young woman missing her lover, but the author borrowed it to express what feeling? Which sentence in the article can show? This makes me miss Jiangnan in the end. (Why does the author miss Jiangnan at this moment? (Analysis: touching the feelings, alone in a foreign land for a foreigner, in the face of the darkness of the reality of the bitter uncertainty, at a loss, want to transcend and want to struggle, through homesickness to dispel the sadness) Thinking about this, looked up fiercely, do not realize that it is already in front of their own door; gently pushed the door to go in, what noises, his wife has been asleep for a long time. (The author returned home from the lotus pond, how is his mind? Analysis: the author from the reverie back to reality, the reality is still the same, the sadness is still the same, the heart is still not quiet, just now what I saw and heard, what I thought was like a dream.)

July 1927, Qinghua Park, Beijing

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