Rodan said life is not without beauty but we lack a pair of eyes to find beauty. Happiness is not like this? We always complain about our lack of happiness. Happiness, in fact, is very simple, it happens all the time around us, but we gently ignore ------
Happiness, in fact, is very simple. That modeling practice, I accidentally cut my hand by the blade, the mouth is very deep, bleeding a lot of blood, the teacher rushed to ride a bicycle to send me to Tangshan Hospital, rushed to help me register, they advanced the medical expenses, but also concerned about asking the doctor how my injuries. At his insistence, the doctor gave me a tetanus shot. When Dad rushed to the hospital, the teacher had finished everything. When he left, he did not forget to give his dad a careful explanation before he went to class. I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do that, but I'm sure I'll be able to do it," he said, "I don't know if I'm going to be able to do it.
Happiness is when a teacher is like a father to his students!
Happiness, in fact, is very simple. Every Qingming Festival, I have to go back to my hometown with my dad. I don't like the sad atmosphere of Du Mu's "rain at the time of the Qingming Festival, the pedestrians on the road want to break their souls", but more like He Zhizhang's "jasper made up a tree high, ten thousand hanging down the green silk tapestry" of the beautiful mood. With the blue sky and white clouds on top of my head, my feet are on the green grass. Play a few rolls, kick a few balls, race a few runs ------ unknown wildflowers in the distance are competing for color, red like fire, pink like haze, white like snow ------- in the springtime suburb, put their own kites and happy mood to fly together.
Happiness is to fly your happy mood in the sunny spring!
Happiness, in fact, is very simple. After the Wenchuan earthquake, "children, quickly grasp the mother's hand" this little poem let me engraved in my heart, I began to understand what is meant by the separation of life and death, and understand the preciousness of family love. I donated all the pocket money in my piggy bank to the children in the disaster area. My mom, who is a member of the ****production party, paid a special party fee of 800 yuan in addition to the unit donation. The adults and children around me have joined the ranks of fundraising. Any greater difficulty divided by 1.3 billion will become insignificant, and any smaller love multiplied by 1.3 billion will converge into an ocean of love.
Happiness is the national cohesion and national pride of "one party in trouble, eight parties to support"!
Happiness, in fact, really simple! What is happiness? It's the feeling in your heart, not the comments of others. The real happiness and sadness, only they understand, everyone's happiness meaning, will not be the same, right? BMW, car, wealth and honor must be happy? Bamboo fence and hut, a small few tea, piccolo and long xiao, and your favorite smile, who can say is not the happiness and joy of life? Then finally realized that happiness is actually a feeling, you feel, is to have. Cherishing what you have is happiness. So, happiness, very simple.
Executive SummaryThe traditional "teacher's proposition - teacher's guidance - students' composition - teacher's correction - teacher's evaluation The new standard clearly pointed out that: "writing is an important way of expression and communication using language and writing, is to know the world, know oneself, the process of creative expression, writing ability is a comprehensive embodiment of language literacy." Therefore, in the process of teaching composition, I explored the writing mode of "imitation statement - extended statement - from paragraph to piece", which was welcomed by the students, and this process was later likened to "imitation statement" by the students. This process was later described by the students as "three jumps".
Keywords: juxtaposition structure, essay writing, triple jump
I, problem generation
Essay writing for students and essay teaching for teachers is a piece of "difficult to gnaw" bones. On the one hand, the students because of life experience is not rich, material is not much, the feeling is not deep, write a composition to scratch their heads, quite a sense of "the clever woman is difficult to cook without rice"; on the other hand, the textbook is updated quickly, and the lack of writing guidance on the textbook or writing guidance is not very practical, teachers are often on the teaching of the composition of the clueless, often arbitrarily set up a The teachers are often at a loss in teaching composition, often randomly assigning a composition topic to the students, regardless of whether the students have the content to write, the cattle do not eat grass and strong pressure head. To hand over the composition is all approved full correction, from punctuation to misspelled words, from the sick sentence to the paragraph, from the title to the structure, from the beginning to the end, all like a doctor to the patient to see the same "comprehensive physical examination". Analysis and evaluation of the composition is also comprehensive, all the advantages are mentioned, all the shortcomings are approved, the teacher thought that this will allow students to inherit all the advantages of the next composition, to avoid all the shortcomings, a bite to eat into a big fat. However, students feel that their essays are hard-hitting everywhere and do not know what medicine to take. This kind of essay writing more or less the same, and even write and do not write the same, this kind of "teacher proposition - teacher guidance - students essay - teachers The traditional teaching mode of essay writing "will be loaded into the annoying box, to the student's mind put on the invisible "set".
The new standard clearly points out: "Writing is an important way of expression and communication using language and writing, is to know the world, to know oneself, the process of creative expression, the ability to write is a comprehensive embodiment of language literacy." The new standard advocates that "students are the masters of language learning", requiring students to write my heart, my hands express my feelings. Visible, the traditional mode of teaching composition as a pool of stagnant water, can not stir up the ripples. The author believes that everything can not be rushed, eyebrows and beard, rather than headache, foot injury. Only a little bit of a breakthrough, a problem a problem to solve, and finally summarize, integrate, in order to make teachers and students understand what they should do, what they are doing, so as to effectively improve the students' writing ability.
The teaching of composition is an infinitely rich world, with a lot of focus: the review of the topic, intention, title, beginning, ending ...... a paper can not be everything, if you can really solve a problem and make this solution has a certain degree of practicality, has been very gratifying. I have been teaching for a long time, I found that when students write, the language is often very wonderful, the facts are also very vivid, but often at will, the sky is the limit, think of where to write, let the mind gallop (I believe that many teachers have encountered similar difficulties). Later, I conducted an in-depth study of this issue, found the crux of the problem, found that the "structural chaos" is the "fatal wound" of the students' composition, so I decided to "the right medicine", to solve the problem. So I decided to "prescribe the right medicine" and start to solve this problem. In general, the common structure of junior high school essay mode has a total division type, sub-total type, juxtaposition, progressive, contrast and so on, I have carefully studied the above five modes, and with five essay class training, and finally teachers and students together on the five modes of generalization, integration, the results are very good, students are interested in strong, great progress in the essay, basically overcoming the "structural confusion" this defect. The most successful of these is the juxtaposition. One of the most successful is the juxtaposition of structural composition guidance class, therefore, I would like to talk about their own teaching process on the juxtaposition of structural composition writing some of the insights of the teaching process, want to discuss this issue with your peers, and will be some of the practice of my writing to share with their peers, in order to **** with the improvement.
The goal of this essay training program is to "imitate the statement - expand the statement - from paragraph to chapter", a process that was later visualized by the students as a "triple jump". "three jumps", the following are the specific teaching steps and teacher-student interaction:
The process of activities
The first process (the first jump): from the material to imitation sentences
Students read several materials provided by the teacher, and then trained according to the teacher's requirements.
Material 1: Life is like water, calm mind is as quiet as water, upright person is as bright as water, light look at fame and fortune is as light as water, laugh at bumps and bruises is as tough as water.
Material 2: Life is like a mirror, people want to constantly enrich themselves, perfect themselves, must have three mirrors - microscope, magnifying glass, plane mirror. Use the microscope to find your own shortcomings, use the magnifying glass to find the advantages of others, and use the plane mirror to illuminate your current situation.
Material 3: life as a flower, life should be like a spring flower in the early spring to meet everything, life should be like a sun flower in the heat of the summer to fight for color, life should be like a waxberry flower in the cold winter to emit fragrance ......
Material 4: life as a punctuation mark, life as a question mark vainly seeking advice, excellence; life Like a comma, life goes on and on, more than the struggle; life is like an exclamation point, affirmation of self, self-motivation; life is like an ellipsis, the impact of the next generation, the death of the fragrance of the aftermath ......
Materials 5: Life is like a game of chess, chess is about chess rivals, life is about the competition of the win-win situation; chess has an attack and a defense, life has to go in and out of the game; chess is a careless, all the plate is lost, life is not a chance to be careful. The whole disk is lost, life can not be lost, time will not come again; chess sometimes loss of troops, and sometimes defeat for victory, life is sometimes a mountain of water, sometimes dark flowers.
Students are more excited after reading the five materials, feel that these life metaphors are quite interesting, I took the opportunity to ask them: "In fact, there are a lot of insights into life, life metaphors are also a lot of, please read the five materials again carefully, repeatedly chew, carefully taste the material from which point of view to reveal the phenomenon of life and the law of the choice of one of the most interested in your imitation.
1) Choose your own metaphors, or use the metaphors in the source material.
②Choose your own angle to reveal the truth of life.
③Use the rhetorical device of prose, you may write three sentences or more than three sentences.
④The number of words can be increased or decreased, and the imitation sentence using simile and prose will be fine. "
Students are more motivated, have moved their pens for imitation writing ...... After writing, table to table to correct each other, and then recommend well-written exercises for the class to share. In this stage (the first jump) appeared a lot of literary excellence of the exercise:
Sun Li students wrote: life is like a flower, life is sometimes like tears like sadness and pain, life is sometimes like the waves of the brilliant and beautiful, life is sometimes like a spark of passion.
Zhang Qinli students wrote: life is like music, music is sometimes low and slow, life is sometimes bumpy and disillusioned; music is sometimes high and exciting, life is sometimes successful and pleased; music is sometimes the sound of the aftermath, life is sometimes fragrant ......
Chen Shasha students wrote: when we were young, we are passionate, dreams in mind The first time I saw this is when I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young man, I was a young woman.
Gu Liqing students wrote: life is like water, life should be as clear and transparent as the stream, life should be as brave as the river, life should be as open and tolerant as seawater ......
Ru Ping students wrote: I think life should be like a geometric figure, life should be as calm as a triangle, life should be as upright as a square, and life should be as perfect as a circle.
Gao Xiaohong wrote: Life is like water, water has different flavors, and life has different flavors. Sometimes life is as sweet as a drink, sometimes life is as bitter as coffee, sometimes life is as fragrant as tea, and sometimes life is as intoxicating as wine.
Zhu Jiafei wrote: life is like water, water has three states, solid, liquid and gas. Some people, his life is like ice, fixed in place, stopped; some people, his life is like water, with and dynamic, left and right; some people, his life is like water vapor, passionate and vigorous.
Cheng Jiali students wrote: life is like a lamp, the lamp will go out, life will die; lamps to continue to add oil, people have to continue to absorb knowledge; lamps burning themselves to illuminate others, life to carve their own dedication to society.
Li Wen wrote: life is like a pen, life should be as elegant as a brush, life should be as strong as a pen, life should be as correct as a pencil, life should be as wonderful as a colorful pen.
Tong Haidong students wrote: life as the English alphabet, life should be like I, the world are all turbid I only clear, all drunken I only wake up, we should always keep a clear head; life should be like Q, spring garden can not be closed, a branch of red apricots out of the wall, we have to continue to work hard to transcend the ordinary; life should be like H, a bridge over the North and the South, the moat has become a road, we want to build up a bridge of communication between people, build up a bridge between peoples and nations. We should build a bridge of understanding between people and nations, and a bridge of prosperity between countries.
Wang Jianfeng students wrote: life is like water, life should be as emotional as water, once the sea is difficult to water, in addition to the witch mountain is not a cloud; life should be as rich as water in the momentum, the flow of three thousand feet, suspected that the Milky Way fell nine days; life should be as rich as water in the changes, or "rocks through the air, shocked Tao patted the shore, rolled up a thousand piles of snow! "and the eye that" spring river lake water even sea level, the sea moon *** tide".
Zhang Yan students wrote: life is like tea. Life happiness as tea, life suffering as tea, life temperament as tea.
The second process (the second jump): from imitation sentences to paragraphs
Students above these imitation sentences after the enrichment of their own knowledge, deepen the understanding of life and feelings, and change others thoughts for their own thoughts, broadening the mind's horizons. The floodgates of thought has opened, some students said to me, teacher, there are other life metaphor, there are other prose can write, so I simply let the students exchange exchanges, discuss what other angles can be written. After thinking and discussing, the students found that there are many life metaphors, such as "life is like a dream" "life is like a play" "life is like a river" "life is like the sea "Life is like a mountain", "Life is like paper", "Life is like poetry", etc. Even for the topic "Life is like water", there are many other metaphors. "This topic, there are many angles to write, such as some students think you can write water can represent the emotions, some students think you can write water can represent the character, some students think you can write water can represent the quality and so on, the answer is colorful, the atmosphere is more active ......
This time I put forward a second request to the students: choose the teacher or classmates to write one of the materials you are most interested in, read and analyze carefully, think about the material or parody of what angle to reveal the philosophy of life, and then the material or parody of each of the platitudes in the expansion of the material or parody of the material or parody of a few platitudes will be expanded into a few paragraphs, and finally written into a 300 to 400 words of miscellaneous feelings about life. . Complete the leap from sentence to paragraph.
After the students write, I let them group to communicate, correct each other, and can not get the teacher to discuss and exchange views. In this session, I give students more time, the purpose is to let them improve themselves in the mutual criticism and correction, **** the same progress. The students basically revised the misspellings, sick sentences, and punctuation in their assignments, so that a piece of miscellaneous feelings about life came out. In this session, the groups also recommended some excellent assignments, in this selection of a best-written assignments to share with you:
Life is like water (Gu Liqing students)
Water is the source of everything, water has the aura of water, water has the character of water, if you are a little more attentive, you will find that the water is also a human emotion.
Life is like water, water can represent the sincerity of people. "Green mountains do not grow old, green water," the green water, that is, the sincerity is always there, sincere and eternal. "Gentleman's friendship is as light as water", the real friendship is about the plain, so that, no matter how far away from the cape, just like a neighbor at hand. You don't hear about Pipe Zhong Bao Shu Ya? Don't you hear Yu Bo Ya Zhong Ziqi? The water of history has quietly run away, but their true feelings still flow in the hearts of people today ......
Life is like water, water can represent the persistence of people. Yuan Zhen "once the sea is difficult for water, in addition to the witch mountain is not cloud", Jia Baoyu "if the water three thousand, I only take a dipper drink." There are many talented people who have made the promise of "the sea is dry and the stone is rotten". The water here, the sea here, has become a lover's heart a stickler, a dedicated.
Life is like water, the water can represent people's love. "Surplus of water, pulse shall not speak", the cowherd weaving women will be how many thoughts scattered into the Milky Way stretched across the middle of them? "You ask the return date is not yet period, Bashan night rain rises autumn pool", Li Shangyin let how many lovesickness fill the chest of the autumn pool? The water is gentle, but at this time it is like a sharp knife carving out the bone-deep thoughts.
Life is like water, and water can represent human sorrow. Life is not as good as nine out of ten things, the water does not know sadness, but people worry, the water is also sad. "Drawing a knife to cut off the water more water, raise a cup of sadness more sadness", the water has become a chopping sadness; "I ask you can have a few more sadness? Just like a river of spring water to the east", the water into the flow of endless sorrow ......
Some people say that human feelings are as light as water, the water into indifference; some people say that the water can overturn the boat, the water into the betrayal. It is really joy, anger, fear, love, evil desire, the water sadness and happiness and love ah!
Student comments:
Student 1: I think Gu Liqing's this life epiphany language is more wonderful, the idea is very clear.
Student 2: He used a parallel structure.
Sheng 3: Gu Liqing has rich knowledge and has memorized more famous poems and verses.
Sheng 4: The first part of the essay is put out and the end is collected.
The third process (the third jump): from paragraphs to chapters
The class is asked to further study the angle chosen for each piece of material, the reasoning expounded, and the feelings generated, and to select the material in which they are most interested for in-depth study and experience, to choose a suitable point of entry, to rationally arrange the structure, and to write a composition. The specific requirements are as follows:
①Perspective of your choice, title word proposed, style is not limited
②Use of metaphorical reasoning
③Use of juxtaposition structure
④Not less than 800 words
⑤Can be further compositions on the basis of the already expanded
In order to let students have a clearer perceptual understanding of the juxtaposition structure of the composition, I showed them a multimedia presentation of an article in which the students had the opportunity to learn about the structure of the composition, and the structure of the composition. I showed them a multimedia model:
Life is like water1
David Yang
There are many comparisons of water in ancient and modern times. A "good as water, water is good for all things without competition", said the most noble virtues like the water to bring benefits to all things without asking for return, can be said to be the comparison of the water to some kind of extreme. Sense of life in the world, I can't help but feel the sentiment: water as a mirror, can reflect the life. Life is like water, the party dashing a life.
Peace of mind is as quiet as water. Tang Dynasty poet Liu Yuxi exclaimed "I hate the human heart is not as good as water, waiting for the waves on the ground". Although the human heart is not as good as water, but it does not mean that it can not be achieved. Water comes from a high place, only to the low flow, and even return to the sea, the precious calm and low-profile. Life as it is, when things when there is a normal heart: contentment is always happy - in the issue of fame and fortune, there is no extravagance, there is no disappointment, and will not despair; can ninjas often peace - unless the big right and wrong, less fight me high and you low, patience, tolerance, and let it be a little bit of the sea and the sky, Peace of mind; honest people are always in - do not do anything wrong, when an honest person, eat well, sleep soundly, sometimes the immediate may suffer some losses, but ultimately do not suffer.
Being honest is as clear as water. Water has no color, crystal clear, clear to the bottom. As a person, handle, do the official, if transparent as water, the life of the bright and open. Promote righteousness, stirring up turbidity, must have such a clear nature, upright as a person; treating people, not divided into near and dear, equal treatment; interpersonal interactions, do not engage in ganging up, a clear water; hear gossip, not to engage in the crime of raising the teacher, a smile; the principle of the issue, do not go with the flow, a righteousness.
Lightly look at fame and fortune is as light as water. People born in the world, if you can learn the clear nature of water and "benefit from all things without competition" character, not only the spirit of living in a high place, life will also enter the open place. To achieve such a state, the most need to get rid of the shackles of fame and fortune. The geese have left their voices, people have left their names, want to leave a good reputation, there is nothing wrong, but can not be tired of the name. If you do not care about fame and fortune, not for fame and fortune and fight, life will be very happy. We must know, "the family has ten thousand gold, daily not
Laughing at the bumpy tough as water. "The Yellow River water from the sky, running to the sea will never return", the firm is water; "draw the knife to break the water flow", the tough is water. The road of life is like the Yellow River, with twists and turns. "Things are not always as good as nine or nine times", a person's life can not be smooth sailing. In the face of difficulties, in the face of ups and downs, need to have a broad-minded, more need to be firm, tough. Victory is not proud, defeat is not discouraged, spoils and insults are not alarmed, rich and poor do not move, in good times and not crazy, stuck in a difficult situation and not frustrated, in danger and not panic, by the adversity and not disappointment. If this is the case, then "no matter what the wind and waves, like an idle step", "let the wind and waves, sitting in a fishing boat".
Life, when the water of the quiet, such as the water of the bright, such as the water of the good, such as the water of the tough.
Students read the model essay, the juxtaposition of the structure of the composition has a clearer understanding of the students after the class wrote a number of excellent assignments, such as "people in the mirror", "water-like life", "bloom like a flower", "chess people have enlightenment", "the punctuation of life", "the graph of life", "tea, people", "the three states of life", "life as a pen", "the letters of the alphabet life". "Five Elements" and Life" and so on, here I would like to choose one of the juxtaposition structure will be more successful use of the essay to share with you.
"Five Elements" of Life
Life is one life, grass and trees are one spring. In fact, people are different from grass and trees, grass and trees wither year after year, but year after year regeneration, life is only day after day old, day after day towards death, the so-called year after year flowers are similar to the year after year, people are different. I am not here to lament life, on the contrary, because life is limited, so people should be more poetic inhabiting the earth, poetic like gold, wood, water, fire and earth ......
Life is like gold. Gold, hidden in the ore, need to be constantly honed, processing, will be shining; people, living in the ordinary, need to be constantly carved, in order to become a useful talent; gold, solid, stable, people, more should be collapsed, loyal, which is the basis of the body; gold, precious, rare, life is so, life is priceless, some people say that the life of the treasure, but to carve themselves into a rare talent, so that they become a rare world! The first thing I want to do is to get a good deal on a new product, and then I'll be able to get a good deal on a new product.
Life is like wood. Wood, rooted in the ground, do not choose the environment, not afraid of risk, through the storm and eventually see the rainbow, people, croaking, not afraid of adversity, laugh at the bumps and bruises, thorns and thorns, can be accommodated in the community; the size of the wood difference, the small used to cover the wind and dust, the big used as a big carving and painting, there are a small talent talent points, the small is plowing in the spring and summer, autumn and winter, the big is to be a wide range of, and the point of the river.
Life is like water. Water has an easy-going character, nurturing everything and everything is compatible, mountains and plains, flowers, birds, insects and fish, are in harmony with the water, life is also so, to be lively, to be easy-going, with all kinds of people to interact with each other, in order to establish the circle of life, life network; water has a clear qualities, people should have the quality of cleanliness, if the people's parents can make their own water, like the general clarity, spotless, then the country does not need to punish corruption; Horizontal light, tasteless, the human heart if you can be as plain as water, but not excessive pursuit of money and power, fame and status, the world will reduce many corrupt officials, society will add a few points of peace and harmony.
Life is like fire. Fire symbolizes hope, the fire of the stars, can start a prairie fire, life is also, hope in, the dream is in, the value of the significance of; fire symbolizes the struggle, it is in the wholeheartedly devoted, life is not extinguished, more than burning, life should be so, life is not stopping, more than struggling; fire symbolizes the dedication, it sacrifices itself unreservedly, in order to brighten up mankind, warm mankind until they burned themselves into ashes, life is more so. Silkworms to the death of silk, candles into the ashes of tears began to dry, we have to be like the fire, like the spring silkworms to sacrifice themselves to dedicate themselves to society, live out of the realm.
Life is like earth. Soil has a rich connotation, gold, iron ore, copper, diamonds ...... are not hidden in the soil, life should also have real talent, and red and professional; soil has valuable qualities, it is colorful, it is simple, although it contains everything, but not self-righteousness, life is vital to maintain the nature of the working people, not with the passage of time, status changes and changes, "poor people are not the same, they are not the same, they are the same. It is important to maintain the original color of the working people, not to change with the passage of time and the change of status, "The poor can not be moved, the rich and powerful can not be obscene." Be a "native", be a "grassroots", be a "cloth".
Gold, wood, water, fire, earth contains the essence of life, if life is a flower, then the five elements is the flower of life's petals, only these five petals are beautifully blossomed in your life, the flowers of life will be fragrant. Finally, I would like to use a couplet to summarize my perception of life - East, West, South, North, Square, Square, Wonderful, Gold, Wood, Water, Fire, Earth, Petals, Fragrant. Crossword: five elements of life.
Finally, teachers and students *** with the discussion summarized the scope of application of the juxtaposition of structural patterns, we found that the juxtaposition of structural patterns of practicality is still very strong, lyrical prose, expository prose, narrative (juxtaposition of a few things), argumentative essay, expository essay, and other styles of writing can be used, and some students even think that when writing poetry can also be used in juxtaposition of structure, reflecting the beauty of the architecture of the poem. Therefore, this structural mode of writing will benefit students if they can truly master and flexibly utilize it. I personally believe that this training is successful and has achieved the desired purpose, because after learning this pattern, students often use this structure in their later compositions. --Some people think that power is wealth. Some people think that a healthy body is wealth. Some people think that knowledge is wealth --- some people think that suffering is wealth --- some people think that friends are wealth, spilling out an epiphany about wealth. When writing essays on "time", "happiness", "friendship", etc., many students used the juxtaposition structure. Students can learn to use, this is my biggest relief, I think as long as we seriously study, explore, will make our composition teaching become comfortable, so that the students in the writing feel that the composition is not a pool of stagnant water, but a kaleidoscope of infinite wonderful world.
Three, teaching reflection
Teaching is an art, and is an art of regret. Composition teaching is an art, but also an art of regret. Composition teaching is a language teaching a hard hit, students are talking about "composition" color change, mention writing is sighing, a face of hopelessness. Teachers talk about teaching composition, is also full of confusion, so although the composition of the language classroom is the top priority, but many language teachers are not willing to put a little more time in this laborious and slow composition teaching. Through this attempt at teaching composition activities, I have a little reflection on the teaching of composition and feelings.
1. The new standard for language teaching is: "Modern society requires citizens to have good humanistic and scientific literacy, a spirit of innovation, a sense of cooperation and an open vision, the ability to read and understand and express themselves in a variety of basic skills, as well as the ability to use modern technology to collect and process information. Language education should and can play an important role in creating a new generation needed by a modernized society. In the face of the needs of social development, systematic reforms should be carried out in such areas as the purposes and methods of evaluation." Therefore, in the rapid development of human society today, education should get rid of the influence of "instrumentality" as soon as possible and stay ahead of social development. The reason why education is education lies in the fact that education is an activity to cultivate human beings, and cultivating human beings is the essence of education and the fundamental function of education. Education in the new era should no longer simply train instrumental human beings for the maintenance of an existing society, but should train subjective human beings for a society that has not yet emerged. Of course, education has to serve the real society, and it is indisputable to emphasize a certain social function of education at a certain period of time, but the realization of the social function of education can only be carried out through the main function of cultivating human beings, or else education for the service of society is also deformed. Now, our essay teaching is to let us see such a deformed status quo: we spend a lot of time and energy to train children to "do articles", but made a large number of "false words", "big words", "empty words", "big words", "empty words". ", "empty words", "set of words", the article did not write a good, but the style of writing is spoiled, so the teaching will lead people to the extremely dangerous direction.