"Praise ÷ Criticism = Art" It's a great feeling to go home with a 99-point paper in your hand.
The sky in the mountain town has a rare blue sky and white clouds. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty.
So came a hundred meters speed run back home. "Mom-" I called before I reached the door of the house.
"Back, come on in!" Mom gave me a Chinese smile. After returning my mother's American hug, I laid down on my bed in the coolest "big" pose.
"How did you do on your math test," said my mother, still smiling, as she sat down next to me. "99!" I said and took a sip of water.
"Not bad, good test!" Mom's pitch was an octave higher and her face lit up with a frown. Despite hearing a lot of praise, the heart is still sweet.
"However, mom suddenly and quietly turned a tone, you have thought about where that point lost?" The words really hit home, and I hadn't really thought about a thing. There was a silence that followed, a silence that was frightening, a silence that was suffocating.
"Not being able to lean is your biggest fault, son!" The tone of the mother's voice was very different from a moment before. The sweetness of the heart became seemingly a little sour.
Mother gently closed the door and went out. I felt that she stood in the doorway for a while.
The empty room left only me and the wind-blown curtains ...... Later, I began to think about this matter with another perspective. I began to feel the art of my mother's speech.
Praise is passionate, criticism comes quietly, praise and criticism seem to be unconnected, in fact, not, who is who's padding, who is who's ***, carefully thought out, but meaningful. So I tried to summarize a formula that is the title of this article.
"Criticism is a kind of enjoyment" Everyone wants to be praised by others, rather than let you face red criticism, but I think criticism is a kind of enjoyment, because it can make us benefit, so that we try to improve themselves, and strive to rise. Teachers are very strategic in criticizing people.
First of all, the education is not warm, this time will let you fully appreciate the silent than the sound of the mood. Then the teacher's voice will be raised a little higher, a sharp wind and rain like a sword, so that your mind completely disintegrated, for which the sigh of relief, so as to accept the "Confucius" for the way, and then he will also show a triumphant smile to see you out of the office, if you do not eat his set, but would like to If you do not eat him this set, but want to "independent portal" and he made a fuss, then you are out of order, as the saying goes, "know what's going on is a handsome man", do not get into trouble, or he will also invite parents to the school to help, to this point, I am afraid that you have a six-armed and difficult to get out of the way.
However, occasionally there will be a few "nail households", so that the teacher's face is lost, the prestige of the loss, however, when the teacher saw the following smug "disciples" will try to restore his reputation, and re-establish the prestige of the class. First of all, he will raise his voice to high octave, the mouth of the word like the rising tide of the Qiantang River, like thousands of troops coming, if you are a veteran may still be able to resist, but the teacher's offensive is a wave over a wave, and then he will talk about the purpose of the book in a flash to you, what the state of the country revitalization of China, a class of philosophical philosophy of life ensues, so that you can't understand, can't dodge, and then! Teachers will also use offensive tactics, as is the soccer field of the ever-changing passing skills, time and time again to hit your heart, at this time your heart line of defense in slowly shaking, and finally finally broke through your solid "Maginot" line of defense.
This is the most proud of the teacher, the best audience is the students, the most unfortunate is you, because you will know that the teacher will make an example of you, you will let you write annoying fire experience. But if you have been patient, a meal full of fun criticism, will certainly benefit you, such as listening to Beethoven's symphony as pleasing to the ear .......
Criticism is a kind of don't admission ticket enjoyment, as long as you listen carefully, carefully to understand the deep philosophy, will certainly and I have **** Ming. Remember that criticism is a kind of enjoyment, my friend, don't you think?
However, since we have to move forward, we always have to wander alone. At that time, the lonely soul can withstand the blow of criticism? In many cases, praise is always wearing a beautiful coat, devilishly seeped into your blood, a landslide like a tsunami to destroy all your cognitive field, devouring the beautiful spiritual home; praise of obedience to you, will only fall into its poor slave.
Perhaps, for those who aspire to praise, the pursuit of fame and fortune, criticism is the sinking of the will and loss. And for people with indomitable firm heart and unswerving original intention, criticism is the realization of the ideal and sublimation! "Not through some cold bones, which get the plum blossom fragrance."
Yes, the Creator will never let a person who has no pain, no trials and tribulations, and who has not even experienced criticism, become strong, become a hero, become a pillar. I am not a person who advocates praise, I prefer to let criticism to freeze my soul and make me stronger.
Because, I will never raft the empty sea for romance, even if there are many white waves, layers of wonderful waves and Chu Chu's beautiful Lieutenant Blue. Because I understand so y, if I want to embrace them, the only thing that comes out is the foam with the smell of fish.
I will choose to bravely leap into the depths of the sea, let the seaweed and shells beat my body, but I firmly believe that I will rely on their own efforts and touch the large, unparalleled pearl, I will be able to experience the pursuit of their own and withstood the blow after the joy. Do you want to praise those who are successful in the true sense of the word? Please don't, because they are only preoccupied with the thorns and bumps in the path of knowledge.
Then please give them harsh criticism, then they will certainly stop to look for their own shortcomings and deficiencies, and thus gradually towards perfection. We still sing with sincerity when we criticize each other.
Criticism is accompanied by, we are still high head forward.
2. to praise or criticize as the topic, write a composition of about 600 wordsMonday afternoon, the second class of the *** a ringing, and as always in the classroom door orderly line ready to go to physical education class. When we arrived at the basketball court, Mr. Jiang had already set up mats and pedals waiting for us. Seeing this, we hurriedly accelerated our pace and quickly ran to our position.
"Today we are going to learn long jump." The teacher said. Long jump, standing long jump? How come you have to use pedals? I've never heard of it before, let alone tried it, so I'll have to learn it carefully later. I carefully watched every movement of Mr. Jiang, afraid that if I missed it, I wouldn't be able to do it. I saw Mr. Jiang run a few steps forward from a few meters away, came to the front of the pedal, raised his hands high, left foot on the pedal, and lifted his right foot upwards. "Dang." Mr. Jiang jumped, as light as a dragonfly, and then managed to land on the mat. He ended the whole long jump with his hands swinging back and his legs bent. The students were stunned for a while before they reacted. "Wow, it's beautiful!" "It's awesome!" "It's so far!" The admiration rose and fell.
Next, Mr. Jiang asked us to do a set of long jumps following his movements. When it was my turn, I first silently recalled the main points of the action in my mind, and then took a deep breath, and used my whole body to rush forward. Running to the pedal, I was not nervous at all, bravely lifted a foot, and accurately landed on the pedal. Along with the "thud" sound, there was also the praise from Mr. Jiang: "This girl is great, please ask her to come and demonstrate to us later." I was so happy to hear this, I couldn't believe it. I know that my performance in sports has always been very poor, and sometimes I even get criticized. But today was the first time I heard praise, I really was a bit overjoyed.
After the round was over, I stood at the start again, this time as a demonstration for my classmates. I jumped, pedaled, and landed like I had just done. Just as I was waiting for Mr. Jiang's second praise, I heard Mr. Jiang say with full of regret, "There is still a little bit of a glitch, don't hit the small step when you are about to reach the front of the pedal." At once, my heart sank. Hey, it is not easy to get the teacher's praise!
This class did not get a hundred percent of the teacher's affirmation, but it gave me courage, confidence and strength. I'll be sure to do a good job in the future, and try to improve my sports performance.
3. to criticize or praise the main topic of writing a homeworkpraise and criticism praise, what a beautiful word, everyone likes, but such a beautiful word but also hides a variety of traps, so that people can not defend; criticism, although against the ear, everyone does not love to hear, but it often produces a great impetus to accelerate the pace of your progress. In the third grade, I was a good student, second only to the class "top" students. Whenever the teacher praised them, the students to cast envious glances at them, my heart will be itching to be like them to become the focus of the teacher's attention, the idol in the hearts of their classmates. So, I secretly resolved: to surpass them, to take the praise belonging to them in their own arms. Later, the seed of vanity and triumph that floated in my heart slowly sprouted and took deep roots. Subsequently, I was like a different person, all day alone in the room, buried in homework and books, sometimes writing and scratching, sometimes read the words, but also really under a bit of "hanging beam stabbing" hard work. Before class, I carefully study the text; in class, I more actively and enthusiastically answer the question; after class, I seriously review, do not dare to have a little relaxation and slowness, for fear that the high score is occupied by others. I was not afraid of losing my high score to someone else. Finally, in an examination, I unexpectedly did so well - actually in the grade of the first. So, my classmates' admiration and teachers' praise kept crowding into my ears, and I felt like falling into a pile of cotton, which was sweeter than honey. The "top students" who used to be at odds with me played with me again, and the students were all impressed by me and surrounded me with stars. On the way home, the sky seemed bluer than ever, the clouds seemed whiter than ever, and the birds in the trees chirped beautifully. The next period of time, I live in a honeypot every day, all day happy, always thinking "Now I'm the first grade, these I know; even if not, with my so smart brain, as long as the class after the book will understand." So the class is no longer as attentive as before, the book thrown aside, homework scribbles, the study thrown to the paw paw country to go." "Modesty leads to progress, pride leads to backwardness." Another exam is coming. Another chance to make a name for myself, I picked up the paper with confidence and took a look - do not look at it, a look at it is dumbfounded, how so many will not!" Hi! I blame myself for not listening to the lecture ......" I complained to myself while even with do write the test paper. The next day, the teacher announced the results of the paper, the classroom was very quiet, students stretched their necks and ears wide open, for fear of listening to the wrong or missing a little something. I waited with anxiety, and I guessed that a prisoner waiting for the judge's decision was just like that. The top ten is certainly impossible, a dozen should have it ...... twenty, twenty-one ...... until thirty is not ...... I can no longer sit still, even if I have slightly stood up I was not even aware that I had stood up slightly and was lying on the table. It was a long time before the teacher read, "Li Fei, 78 points!" What! What? I didn't believe my ears, I got the test paper, rubbed my eyes, and the red "78" marks came to my eyes, like a blow to the head. I don't know what the teachers and classmates said after that. It didn't matter what they said, and it didn't matter if I listened to them or not - I knew that the teacher's words were nothing but hateful criticism, and the classmates' whispers were nothing but "gloating" and "sneering", along with strange looks. I went home in a trance on the road, I always think the sky is very gloomy, but also smacked the birds in the branches of the tree chattering noisy annoying, but also to the tree threw a few stones, scared the birds screamed and fled ...... Later, I gradually understand: praise is a kind of encouragement, but not a honey pot; criticism is a kind of encouragement, but not a * * *, we should not be because we have been given the opportunity to get the best of the best, but not because we have been given the opportunity to get the best of the best. **, we can not get praise and complacent, and then forget, nor can we be criticized and discouraged, lose the heart of progress. Therefore, we should have a clear mind in front of both criticism and praise in order to set up their own position .
4. Write an essay on the topic of praise or criticismPraise and Criticism
Praise and criticism are two words with very different meanings that are well known to everyone. But who can show their noble spirit when facing them?
We need to be humble in the face of praise. In fact, we are very proud of our successes when we have gone through the agonizing pain of drilling. But more proud, is the beginning of our success, in the face of this joyful performance, do not we think of the beauty of the spot? Do we not think of the value of excellence? Do we not think a little farther ahead and think that success today means a bumpy start? Think of these, we will be able to success as a driving force, so that they "make up for the queue, some benefit," the opposite, in the success of complacency, stagnation, satisfied with the status quo of the people. The excitement of their success engulfed the perseverance they had before success, loss of will to fight, self-canceling degeneration, and finally a defeat, so this success has become a failure.
In the face of criticism, we have to be brave. In fact, anyone who is criticized is always a little afraid, and even retreated. However, the most frightening thing is that in the face of criticism, we do not realize the true meaning of it, and repent from it. We should be brave enough to create a new starting point, accept criticism with courage, listen to others' suggestions and opinions, and make ourselves more enriched. Even if we are facing criticism, we can turn criticism into motivation, so that criticism prompts us to praise. We have all heard of Lenin as a child in his aunt's house when the game broke the vase, the beginning of his apprehension, fear of condemnation, and wanted to (hide it, so that things) to be left unsettled, but his bravery overcame the retreat, he bravely admitted the mistake in the face of criticism, the result of criticism into praise. It became a motivation and gave him a brave spirit. The opposite of this is the person who flinches in the face of criticism. We have to strongly oppose this kind of behavior! They are timid, they give up at the slightest setback, they can't face this kind of strong criticism, they only see it as a condemnation against them, and they don't realize the meaning of it. This is the abyss into which they fall, and they have no hope of success.
It's not hard to see that the attitude and mindset in the face of praise and criticism is extremely important, and it's about as fundamental as it gets, I think.
5. to "criticism" or "praise" for the topic of writing a composition, urgent"criticism" topic of the composition of the assessment of the clock high cloud exam essay questions (60 points) (this is omitted) The first is to examine the topic 1, pay attention to the characteristics of the topic (material plus topic) 2, pay attention to the study of the material and the meaning of the prompts three people learning to paint on the way to learn the art of their own work of art to 1,000 yuan price tag to sell their first customer said the same thing: "your paintings are afraid that it is not worth so much, right?" (Are all criticisms from others sincere and well-intentioned? Why did the customers say such things?) Criticism is not always sincere and well-intentioned; it is directly related to the critic's own character and motivation.
A customer who says something like this may be saying it as a well-intentioned reminder, or they may be trying to drive down the price. One of them listened, weighed his painting carefully, and finally sold it for $2,000, and he went on to become a famous painter through his subsequent hard work.
He was Tintoretto. (Why didn't he listen to his customers? Did he do the right thing? Why? What does this suggest about what one should do when faced with criticism from others?) It is important to check yourself against the criticism of others, so that you can figure out whether the criticism of others is in line with your own reality.
If it doesn't match your own reality, never follow it blindly. The other, after hearing this, just gently tore up the painting, and from then on he changed his profession, studied sculpture and became a master of his generation.
He is the famous sculptor of the Tang Dynasty, Yang Hui Zhi. (Why did he listen to his customers? Is it right for him to do so? Why? And what does this tell us about what we should do when faced with criticism from others?) If you find that others' criticisms are well-intentioned and in line with your own reality, you should accept them with an open mind and listen to them carefully.
The third one, thinking that his painting might not really be worth the price, lowered his demand and sold it for 500 dollars. To this day, he is only a third-rate painter who sells his paintings to make a living and leads a wandering life.
He has been living right next to us all along. (This third person did exactly the same thing as the second person, so why was the effect very different?) He did not make a concrete analysis of the criticisms of others, and blindly listened, blindly believed and blindly followed the criticisms of others.
(What conclusion can we draw from the practices of the above three people?) For the criticism of others, both a correct attitude, but also have a clear mind, based on facts, should be listened to with an open mind, should not be listened to adhere to the self, in short, if there is a change, not to add encouragement. This is the power of criticism.
Criticism is sometimes the power to inspire the desire to go up; sometimes it is a turnaround, guiding towards another successful peak; sometimes it is poison, accidentally destroying a person's life. In fact, the most crucial thing is that everyone faces the criticism of the mentality.
(Is the key word in the prompt "strength" or "mindset"? What kind of mindset do we need to face criticism?) The key word is "mindset". In the face of criticism, we should have such a mentality: both sincere and modest, but also rational and confident.
Please take "criticism" as the topic to write an article of not less than 800 words: the title of their own, the genre of their choice (except poetry), the content must be written within the scope of the topic. (In summary, this topic to essay, to fall in the critic's point of view to write, or fall in the critic's point of view to write?) 3, through the study of the significance of the material, and in conjunction with the actual situation, we can "set" what "intention"? (① If there is, then change, if not, then increase the encouragement.
or ② To accept others' criticisms critically. Or ③ to correctly \ rationally \ in a good state of mind to deal with the criticism of others.
Or other, such as "to learn to grow in the criticism of others" and so on. Among them, the best idea is: ① because it most accurately reflects the purpose of the question, the best reflection of the correct state of mind in the face of criticism.
）4、注意此题最适合写什么文体的文章阅卷评分标准1、立意基本准确，才能高于36分；偏题严重的，只能低于36分；完全偏题的，则更低。2、除立意外，语言、结构、材料及篇幅，也是评分的重要指标。
The synthesis of these five aspects of the situation, the composition is divided into first-class (more than 50 points), second-class (45-49 points), third-class (42-44 points), fourth-class (36-41 points), and fifth-class (36 points below). 3, the number of words difference between a line (20 words) deducted 1 point, up to 5 points (5 lines); difference of more than 5 lines, counting the second volume (structure is more complete) or residual volume (structural incompleteness)
4, the title has a language disease, misspelled words, deduct 1 point; no title deduct 2 points. 5, poor writing, discretionary deduction of 1 a 3 points.
The main problem 1, the examination of the topic of intent: deviation from the purpose of the topic, talk about "the art of criticism", "mindset determines success or failure", "people in the confidence" and so on; misunderstanding of the concept, so as to put "criticism". Misunderstanding of the concept, so that the "criticism" replaced by "slander", "blow", "frustration", "adversity", "frustration", "frustration", "frustration", "frustration", "frustration" and "frustration", "frustration". "Adversity", "tribulation", "test", etc.; playing "rubbish", or "chaotic skewer", such as by "the power of criticism is huge, can make people succeed, can also make people fail" into the pen, and then talk about "the success or failure of life"; smuggling entrainment, adding Content, such as writing "criticism and life", "criticism and self-criticism", "criticism and tolerance" and so on; ambiguous intention, and the lack of the necessary point; can not look at the problem dialectically, so that One-sided, absolutely hold the theory; confined to the material, throughout the story, from the first person to the third person, the article is finished. 2, the material: the words do not have anything, the argument is not based on; the material is inconsistent with the main idea; the material in the question is copied unchanged in the text; the material is too much or too little; the material is false.
3, writing: no clear center sentence; do not deduct the title, the title; argumentative essay does not unfold the logic of the matter level, but to the examples of the narrative, stacking to put together the article; argumentative essay narrative more than less argumentative, argumentative is not strong; beginning or end of the writing of a number of irrelevant metaphors, platitudes; and take Li Bai, Tao Yuanming, Su Dongpo, and so on, a few not very relevant to the ancients to vigorously toss a number of. More than 100 words in the title, more than 100 words in the postscript, the middle of the sparse; fragmented paragraphs (such as a paragraph of a sentence), the writing fluttered.
4, structure: where you think of where to write, no structure, no chapter; patchwork, stacking, no chapter logic, the article is scattered; thesis structure is incomplete, the lack of "how to do" part (this topic should have). In short, messy, scattered, disabled.
5, language: lack of elegance, and even many typos. 6, there is the title is not relevant or have language problems, typos, word count is not enough, writing is poor and other hard work.
A few reminders 1, when writing the material plus the topic of the composition, for insurance.
6. Essay writing ah, to praise (criticize) later for the content, write a 400-word essay do notPraise is what a magic word, it wants to find a master, and everyone wants it. The praise is a wealth, a spiritual wealth. Everyone has praise patronized when the feeling rushes into the heart, echoing a sweet laughter. Today, I will use the pen in my hand to depict that happy scene. I remember clearly that it was a windy and sunny dusk, and the sky looked like it had been colored with yellow paint, yellow with red. After the physical education class, we were sweating like gusts of wind, scrambling to the classroom to drink water, and I was running upstairs with smoke coming out of my head, blending into the dry, cold air. At that moment, my classmates came running towards me with great strides and joy in their eyes. I called out, "What's the matter?" The moment he answered me, I was so stunned I suspected I was traveling in a dream, I raised a shaky hand and pinched my face. Ouch! I hadn't dreamt it, but he said I'd won the first prize. I can not resist the pleasant, say when it is too late, then fast, dashed to the teacher's office, saw the teacher a look of joy, then come forward to see, a striking font size - A, is dancing on my composition book. The teacher raised his hand, patted my shoulder and said, "Keep up the good work." At that moment, I felt the beauty of the world. Praise is a treasure, a spiritual treasure. That feeling - great and a love, there are many kinds of love, mother's love, father's love, friendship love ...... but I think the most intimate love or the teacher's criticism of the love of the students. My teacher Zhou a very strict, reward and punishment. Often face, men and women are equal, but from him I experienced the love of criticism. That time, I forgot to bring my test paper, I sat in my seat, I have been uneasy and nervous. I was afraid that Mr. Zhou would find out. But what I feared most happened. "Where's the paper?" Mr. Zhou asked. "I don't have it." I said. "You didn't bring it or you didn't write it?" Mr. Zhou asked in disbelief. "No." I said in a low voice. I didn't dare to raise my head and kept it down. "Really? Write me an ideological understanding and send it to my office this afternoon ." "Uh-huh ." I replied. Teacher Zhou left while revising the test papers . It's not just that I didn't bring it, but I'm still asked to write an ideological understanding, the other students didn't bring it either, why don't you let them write it . Eh! I'd better write it! It's bad luck! When I was writing my thoughts, I suddenly realized why Mr. Zhou asked me to write my thoughts. He wanted me to understand that I should be brave enough to admit that I did something wrong, to know what I did wrong, and then to correct it so that I wouldn't do the same thing next time. Thank you for criticizing my love, your love grows with me. May be a little wrong, but I can't think of anything else but this .
7. Please praise or criticize as the theme, write a composition of not less than 450 wordsLife bends and bends the water, the world overlapping mountains.
In life, it is not smooth sailing, we will encounter a lot of difficulties, in the face of one difficulty after another, we try to stand up again and again, but again and again failed, and thus, we are surrounded by people all the time to encourage us, so that we are full of confidence. I remember when I was a child, I accidentally fell down, lying on the ground and crying in pain, my mother slowly came over and kindly said to me, "Good boy, child, stand up by yourself, you can do it."
Perhaps the words of the mother has a magic bar, I really stood up on my own, I was happy to dance. When I was in elementary school, I started to learn how to ride a bicycle, and because I didn't understand the fun of riding a bicycle, I was too scared to learn, so my mom and dad encouraged me, saying, "It's okay, it's okay, we're the ones who are going to do it! You won't fall down, dad and mom will protect you."
Listening to the words of my father and mother, I set up a self-confidence, brave to learn the bike, I did not expect, only a little time, I learned to ride a bike, since then, I will ride a bike as a pleasure, it has become an indispensable companion in my life.
My eyes suddenly dimmed, my hands tightly gripped the test paper, the heart felt so painful as if there are countless knives strangling my young heart, I can not help but tears, finally, tears or can not help but flow down. For a long time can not go out of the shadow of the heart, the teacher encouraged me to say: "This test is not good, no matter, just an occasional loss, and a result does not explain what, I believe that you as long as you try to be sure to do."
My classmates also comforted me by saying, "Yun Yun, don't be sad, you just need to work hard, you will be able to do well next time, you have to believe in yourself ah." ------ In the face of teachers, classmates encouragement I gradually out of the dark abyss, see the light of hope, after, I seriously sum up the experience, learn from the lessons, and finally kung fu is not a success, I in the midterm exams out of a more satisfactory results - math scores 114 points.
Encouragement filled my life, encouragement is like that riverbed is about to dry up when a cheerful stream, fill that riverbed; encouragement is like the field is about to dry up when a timely rain, so that the crops in the field to be moisturized; encouragement is like a bright light in the night, a warm torch in the cold, a fresh spring in the desert ------ With encouragement, I have the confidence. Bravely face the difficulties in life and overcome them; with encouragement, my character to be strong; with encouragement, my future is bright.