The Beginning
The beginning is the first step of the body. A good beginning can make the composition smooth and logical and attract readers. Ouyang Xiu, a great writer in the Song Dynasty, once said in a poem, "the article to see the pen, the argument chi after the first, break the stone out of the most precious, decided to high diarrhea thousand rivers." Means that writing an article should pay special attention to the beginning of the pen, if the pen will be broken, emerging essence, the whole article is like a high cliff diarrhea, momentum as a flood. Ming Dynasty poet Xie Hazel also said: "the beginning of the sentence when the firecracker, sudden sound easy to penetrate." The same emphasized the opening should be a firecracker sudden sound of the momentum of the whole text. Visible. The beginning of the article is quite important, especially in the examination room is more so.
The basic requirements of the beginning is:
The topic should be fast, clever and novel, simple and concise, take care of the overall situation.
The following are examples of different ways to start an essay for reference.
1, open the door, straight to the point.
For example: I have not seen my father for more than two years, I can not forget his back.
--Zhu Ziqing's Back Shadow
My friendship with Min is not ordinary--we were at the same table for three years in junior high school. I have a lot to say about her.
2. Begin by stating the reason for writing.
For example, I have long wanted to write a few words in honor of a few young writers. This is not for the sake of other,
Just because for two years, grief and anger always come to attack my heart, and so far it has not stopped, I would like to take this kind of horrified, will be rid of the sadness, to give themselves a bit of relaxation, according to the straight, that is, I would like to forget about them.
--Lu Xun, "In Memory of Forgetting"
(This kind of beginning enables the reader to understand the motivation for the writing of the work and its general content, and can arouse the reader's emotional ****ing.)
3, the beginning of the story or the story related to the time, place, characters and the environment.
For example, it was more than ten years ago. --Bingxin's "Little Orange Lantern"
(This kind of beginning, simple and clear, after the beginning, can lead directly to the story.)
In the second half of the night in the fall, the moon had gone down, the sun had not yet come out, and there was only a piece of black sky left, except for the night swimming things, everything was asleep. Hua Laobian suddenly sat up, rubbed a match, and lit the lamp, which was covered with grease, so that the two rooms of the teahouse were filled with a greenish-white light.
--Lu Xun "Medicine"
4, the beginning of the account of the things to be recounted or explained. Natural account, flat lead to the following
Example: The Monument to the People's Heroes was completed. Recently, with great reverence, I admired this
massive, majestic and solemn monument.
The monument to the people's heroes
At the beginning of the new semester, I noticed a problem: our class of thirty-three boys, twenty-seven girls, boys two to a table just more than one, the girls are also the same, there will be a boy and a girl sitting at the same table of the crisis. But I never thought that this crisis would befall me.
5, the beginning of the environmental description. Environmental description, rendering the atmosphere
For example, the most memorable thing about the 500 miles of forest in Jinggang Mountain is the moso bamboo. From a distance, it is lush and green,
overlapping, and you can't see the end of it. From close up, some ......
--"Jinggang Cuizhu"
October 9 is here again, and Mr. Lu Xun has been dead for sixty years. From evening to midnight, quietly, sitting alone in front of the window, letting the cold rain beat against the window pane. Under the lamp, a pot of hanging orchids faintly painted a wall of emerald-colored bookcases. The night wind is blowing, and I feel a slight chill on my body. Thinking of Mr. Lu Xun, tears slipped down.
(This kind of beginning can also give a description of the social environment.)
6, to characterize the beginning. The impression is realistic
For example, two children came to our yard. One is an older sister, with pigtails and a small flowered coat;
One is a younger brother, with hair on his head, as if he had fastened a teapot lid.
She, ugly: yellow thin face; pointed chin; pale almost invisible eyebrows under a pair of thin squinting eyes; nose flat and large; a mouth of uneven teeth, slightly yellow ...... alas! Needless to say, her appearance really doesn't fit such a melodious name -- Zhu Lili. -- "The Same Table"
(This kind of beginning will immediately arouse the reader's interest, eager to know what interesting things happened. In addition, a good beginning of characterization can also highlight the character traits of the characters.)
7, association symbols, marvelous
A dream, once buried under the gunboats of the Western bandits, leaving behind the old generation of bitterness is more than teardrops of heartache and look forward to as a witness. Accompanied by the tears of the Yangtze River grew up we are also young people have tasted sadness, stepped on the previous generation left behind the imprint of expectation, looking forward to the day ...... -- "Expectation"
8, to lyrical argumentative language to start. To express emotions and move people with feelings
For example, every day in North Korea, I was touched by something. The tide of my thoughts and feelings was
running indulgently, and it made me want to tell my friends in the motherland everything. But what I am anxious to tell you is an important experience of my feelings, and that is this: I feel more and more y who are our loveliest people! --Wei Wei Wei, "Who are the most lovely people"
In the twilight, a few wisps of cooking smoke rose from the farmhouse. I held a bouquet of gardenias and stood in front of Mr. Zhang's window. Mr. Zhang, you are still as busy as ever? It's time to take a break, today is your holiday - Teacher's Day. I've come to see you with my harvest. -- "Trivial Memories"
(The beginning is directly lyrical and holds the reader's heartstrings, which can arouse the reader's emotional ****ing.)
9. Begin with suspense or other intriguing ways. Setting up contradictions, fascinating
Example: the famous vocalist Prof. Sulin found a strange thing ......
--What is The Second Exam
"I just don't believe it. You've lived in this class for more than two years and you don't have any feelings for this collective? ...... "This is what the class teacher Mr. Chen said to me this morning. I looked at Mr. Chen's angry gaze, aggrieved tears straight in my eyes, mentally said, "Mr. Chen, you misunderstood ...... how can I not love our class body?"
10, to the beginning of the argument. Famous quotes point the way to the beginning
For example, we Chinese have backbone. -- "Talking about backbone"
Bacon said, "The man who has no true friends may be called the man who is truly miserable and eternally trapped in a life of solitude."
His words speak of the importance of friends. Yes, if a person loses his friendship, he simply cannot survive in the world. -- "Friends"
(This method of opening the door and revealing the argument is often used in argumentative essays.)
11. Begin with rhetorical methods
●Patterned repetition, creating melody
A friend is someone to whom I can give my sincere feelings; a friend is someone to whom I can give my full trust; a friend is someone to whom I can share in times of joy and walk with in times of danger. There is no friend in life, just like there is no sunshine in life. I have such a good friend. -- "Friends"
●Questions to open the chapter, boundless
The past is like smoke, with the passage of time, mostly faded into oblivion, but that pair of eyes, how can I make me forget?
--"Friends"
●Quoting the beginning of the lyrics, resonating through the clouds
"Will you remember tomorrow/the diary you wrote yesterday/will you think of tomorrow/you used to be the one who cried the most.... ... "A melodious "You at the Same Table" came out from the roadside audio-visual bookstore, and the music with sheepish feelings brought my thoughts back to the time three years ago ...... -- "The Same Table
●Contrasting and contrasting, highlighting the key points
With the passage of years, many people are gradually forgotten by me, however, there is such a pair of eyes, a voice and a figure, so far haunting my mind, can not be forgotten for a long time. Beside it, a small tree is pulling out tender buds. The roots of the old tree withered, it lost the sap of life to the small tree; the old tree's leaves yellowed, it injected the green life into the small tree. The old tree has gone through the vicissitudes of life and completed its difficult course. Now, the small tree has just drawn its branches and spit out its leaves, but the old tree has left it ...... This is just like Grandpa leaving me, he was too late to accept my feelings of repayment to him, and left me in a hurry. -- "Trivial Memories"
12. Beginning with the method of writing an article
●The desire to raise and suppress first, develop the appetite
Ugh, how did the teacher let me sit at the same table with him? She's the meanest girl in my class! Because of this, everyone called her "Tigress".
●Flashbacks to attract readers
As we rode away from the National Defense Education School, I don't know why, but tears were welling up in my eyes. Is it because I am nostalgic? Is it to stay in love with that hard and tiring but energetic life, or to stay in love with the soldier who treats people harshly but sincerely and kindly, our instructor? -- "Friends"
●●To set things right, to set things right
Some people say that the indifferent is to see through the red dust, see through everything, think that everything is false, hypocritical ...... This view is a misinterpretation of the indifferent. If we turn to the dictionary, we will understand that the "indifferent" is the meaning of not pursuing fame and fortune ...... -- "indifferent"
●The solution to the problem of laying out, express the center
●Title as the crown, philosophy as the first
Everything in the world can hardly escape the dialectics of nature, which is right and which is wrong, which is good and which is bad, which is good and which is bad, which is good and which is bad, how can we put it in a nutshell?
If memory can be transplanted
The topic of the essay clever beginning
A good beginning is half of the success of the essay, the beginning of the essay should be beautiful, handsome. However, the beginning of the composition of many students, or off-topic, or empty and tasteless, or bland, not in line with the composition of the "vivid image", "literary" requirements. The following examples.
Materials: businessman said, the joy is to see their hard-earned business is increasingly prosperous; teachers said, the joy is to see their "peach and plum all over the world" when the gratification; parents said, the joy is to see their own children grow up to be talented; little sister said, the joy is to wear a beautiful dress over "! June 1" Children's Day; senior students said, the joy is to see the performance barometer in the lovely sun's smiling face ......
Please write the beginning of an essay on the topic of "happiness".
General Requirements
1. If it is not written as a novel, the beginning must be on topic? It is better to appear the words of the topic . The deduction should be flexible and avoid restating the topic.
2. The beginning should seek to avoid a bland abstract argument, avoiding the narrative of a long story as the beginning of the argument.
3. The beginning should be made small, and one of the dimensions of the larger topic should be chosen to facilitate specific description and lyricism.
4. The beginning should reflect literary style and emotion.
A process
This way of beginning is easy to write "my" experience and emotions of the narrative and prose.
Example: As a child, I was often drunk on other people's stories, touched by other people's touches, saddened by other people's sadness, once the tears were weathered in the depths of memory ......
When other people no longer touched me, I tried to touch myself, so I brought up the pen! --Writing, is my joy.
Comments: A short process of writing out the reasons why writing is "my joy", introducing the topic naturally.
Second, analogous
This kind of general by natural phenomena, scenery and introduce the topic of life, can obviously reflect the literary style, and can reflect a certain craftsmanship.
Example: Happy, the sea jumped up a wave, walked through thousands of mountains and valleys, it is free; happy, a note dancing on the piano, after a careful creation, it is wonderful; happy, the unchanging true meaning of life, after unremitting efforts, it is eternal; happy, a hard-working after the harvest, reap the fruits of the sweat of the bounty.
Comments: introduced by nature to life, before and after echoing good, better reflect the literary style.
Three, dialogic
The main idea will be introduced in a dialogic way, generally more lively and natural, not easy to run.
Example: Early in the morning, the sun had just risen. I asked a blind man, "Are you happy?" "Happy. Because I can feel the warmth of the sun in my heart."
An old man walking hobbling in the distance came by. I asked, "Are you happy?" "Happy. Because I have children and grandchildren."
I pressed my heart and asked, "Are you happy?" "Happy. Because I have the love of my loved ones."
Yes, the greatest joy in life is in cherishing what you have.
Comments: the beginning of a conversation, naturally lead to the center of what they want to express - cherish what you have now, is happy.
Four, lens type
Choose to reflect the main theme of the topic of the life of the lens to start, write to specific, image.
Example: birds crowing happily in the morning mist; streams flowing happily in the mountain streams; breeze happily caressing the mountains in the spring; drizzle happily moisturizing the earth in the cool. My friend, can you look at all this and not be moved?
We are moved because we long for a happy life. What is happiness? Happiness comes from the small satisfactions of life.
Comments: From the natural beauty of the beginning, led to the topic of "happy", the line of natural flow. The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do this.
Fifth, summarized
This beginning to make up for the defects of the beginning of the generalization, concise and clear to put forward the point of view.
Example: happy, is the old man to see the mood of the children and grandchildren; happy, is a pair of lovers quietly snuggled together in the mood; happy, is a favorite book, eat a sweet strawberry mood.
Happiness is a touch deep inside.
Comments: the three intrinsically related scenes form a set of prose, with a summary sentence to point out the main idea of the article.
Sixth, reverse-entry style
From the opposite angle of the topic material or from the opposite side of the idea, easy to come up with new.
Example: When Jane Eyre said, "I'm not an emotionless machine," I laughed like a bitter melon, I'm the emotionless dead machine, covered with a white cloth made of test questions.
Is that too much? No! I'm serious when I say that I'm not happy because of the test questions, because of the exams, and that happiness has become a screw rusted to powder on the machine.
Comments: from the opposite start, write "I'm not happy" intention to introduce the topic, in line with the actual student life.
Skillful mastery of several ways to start, the face of different types of essays, the pen can be handy.
Ending
The ending is the natural result of the development of the content of the article, is the total contraction of the whole text. Good ending, can receive the role of deepening the central idea, and intriguing, leaving a deep impression.
The basic requirements of the end is: close to the topic, the natural end of the whole text, can deepen the reader's impression and understanding, to do a clean, without dragging the mud.
The following are some examples for reference.
1, implicit deep intriguing ending.
For example: through the lychee woods, I looked far away from the fields, where there are farmers standing in the paddy fields
, hard work in the rice planting, they use their labor to build their own lives, in fact, it is also in the brewing of honey - for themselves, for other people, but also for the future generations of children and grandchildren to brew the honey of life.
That night, I had a strange dream that I had become a small bee.
--Yang Shuo, "Lychee Honey"
(Such an ending can leave the reader with rich space for imagination, creating an artistic effect that is evocative of the past.)
2. An ending that raises hopes or issues a call to action.
For example, can you bear to let the door of your wisdom closed forever? Are you willing to blindly let others lead you forever? Are you willing to be nothing but a two-legged bookcase forever? If your answer is no, then you must not forget to bring that key with you, and you must be able to ask questions, and ask them diligently.
--The Spirit of Asking Questions
(This kind of ending is often used in argumentative essays, which can draw the reader's attention, y impress the reader from the inner world, and have the corresponding effect.)
3, the natural conclusion of the whole text.
For example, we'll take the St. Malo boat on our way back so that we don't meet him again.
--Maupassant, My Uncle Yule
That year, he was forty-two years old. -- "Bow to the End"
(The article recounts the deeds of Comrade Jiao Yulu Lu, and ends with only one sentence, contracting the whole text and ending it abruptly, which can arouse the reader's infinite feelings of emotion and reverence.)
4, summarize the end of the generalization.
For example: Marx's life, a life of glorious fighting, but also a life of hard study, his spirit of diligent study, is always worthy of our learning.
(This kind of ending can make the whole text become more clearly thought out and focused, and the meaning to be expressed is clearly and intuitively presented to the reader.)
5, the end of the lyrical argument.
For example: I think: hope is no matter what, no matter what. This is just like the road on the ground; in fact, there is no road on the ground, walking more people, will become the road.
--Lu Xun's "Hometown"
(This is a thought-provoking way to end a sentence with a cautionary tale. It can serve as a finishing touch, deepening the center of the article on the one hand; on the other hand, it can highlight the meaning of the article.)
6, ending with a character or scene description.
For example: "It's my--" she yelled half a sentence in a rage, and then turned her face away, in the moonlight, I saw her eyes glistening, I also saw the quilt of white lilies sprinkled on the date-red background, a symbol of purity of feeling, covering I also saw the quilt of white lilies on a date-red background, a flower symbolizing pure affection, covering the face of this ordinary, bamboo-dragging young man.
--Ru Zhijuan, "Lilies"
7, the end of the topic and the beginning of the echo of the end.
For example: (the beginning is) a flurry of heavy snow fell more than half a foot thick, the sky and the earth a foggy ...... ending is as follows:
The wind, more fierce, the snow, bigger. -- "Night Walking through Lingguan Gorge"
(This kind of ending makes the whole text form an organic whole, with the first and last echoing each other, so that the article becomes one and self-contained.)
8, suspenseful end. The end of the story to leave the reader to ponder the continuation of the complement, so set up suspense, provoking readers to read "think" not to release the hand, not to get to the bottom of the ripples of feelings, such as the novel "about the problem of slippers" at the end of the question:
"Little Wang, chief of section in the end whether he can be elected? In the soon to be convened People's Congress, you can see the difference." Is it an "election" in one fell swoop? Or "retire to the second line"? The reader is really hard to tell!
9, reproduce the end. The end like a movie camera reproduces the characters in a particular environment of the special identity, portrait, language, action, etc., to deepen the reader's impression, such as the end of the "back":
"I read here, in the crystal light of tears, and saw that fat, green cotton robe, black cloth coat back. Alas! I do not know when I shall meet him again."
Reproducing the father to buy orange back, can be described as tearful, causing readers **** Ming.
10, quote end. Narrative essay cited at the end of famous poems, lyrics and sayings, smooth water "lead" boat, received a stone three birds effect. Such as "Pear Blossom" cited Lu You's "Pear Blossom everywhere" for the end, so that the title of the text is reflected, echoing the first and last, implicitly and figuratively written out of the spirit of Lei Feng continues to pass, everywhere, sublimating the main idea, but also easy for readers to remember.
11, reveal the end of the mystery. That is, the main part of the article in heavy ink and color set up a "fan face", buckle the reader's heart, so that the characters "true colors" revealed in the tail, such as "watching the play" an article of the author of the first female protagonist of the light and agile pace, rounded throat, beads like lyrics, far-reaching echo to the fullest! Splash of ink, provoking the reader to ask: "Who are the actors on stage?" And then a stop, the end of the truth - "Who is this master of our art? He is comrade Mei Lanfang." Make readers clap their hands and remember the name forever.
12, the end of the cycle. In real life, many things week after week, cyclic performance, how to make appropriate arrangements at the end of the narrative to achieve the purpose of revealing the center? Try to look at the end of the "more than three or five buckets":
"The next day, a group of open boat came to anchor here, the town will perform the same story." As the story is repeated day after day, the tragic fate of the peasants in old China intensifies and the theme is emphasized.
13, dialog end. Words are the voice of the heart, the voice to write people, hear their voices as see their people. Such as the end of the novel "Shoes":
"The soldier said in a low voice to the cobbler:" No need, his legs have been in the front hospital ...... He specially wrote to ask me to give you the money, thank you! After saying this he walked away with a big stride."
Answer in the "he" - cobbler day and night looking forward to picking up the shoes of the "big man" tall image of the military in the reader's tears on paper.
In addition to the above ending methods, there are also "date kernel" of the "reasoning end", "antelope wood carving" of the "rhetorical end", "Mr. Wen Yiduo's say and do" of the "control end", "ordinary workers" of the "end of the", "the", "the", "the", "the", "the", "the", "the" and "the". ", "Proverbial Ending" of "The Ordinary Laborer", "Ironic Ending" of "Three Steps Up in a Row", "Interpretation Ending" of "It's Not a Shooting Star", "Dinner in the Meadow", and "The Rhetorical Ending" of "The Rhetoric Ending" of "The Antelope and the Wooden Carving". The "close-up end" of "Dinner in the Meadow" and so on.
In short, the beginning and end of a good article, in addition to the above points, but also the main body of the article should be formed as a whole, both and the main content of the article echoes each other, complement each other, so as to achieve the perfect expression of the effect of integration.
Exercise Explanation:
[Segment Example]I
A vast sea of people, a vast world, strolling in this lively world of the world, enjoying the cradle of culture and knowledge, shuttling between people of the same way, you are wearing a simple and generous sportswear, looking back at me without stinting to give me a sincere smile, and so I knew that the crowd, I have a friend again.
--from "In This Life" (beginning)
When watching TV, if the beginning of a movie is not appealing, many viewers will change the channel with a "snap". How, this is not enough to prove that "a good start is half of the success" this truth? Writing an article is the same, if the beginning of the bland, pretentious, hard, people are not willing to read down, even if the hard to read down, will also be the impression of the whole text greatly reduced. So, how can we design a good article to start? We say that a good beginning of the article, not only to do the pen to the topic, but also to form a momentum, the article behind the drive up. Specifically, the following methods can receive a preemptive effect:
I, set the scene, let the characters shine. Some of the people mainly or to describe the relationship between the characters of the main article, there is a character "appearance" of the problem. If you outline a scene of the character's life with a concise ink, accompanied by the character's personalized action or language, then the character will have the opportunity to "appear on stage to sing a big show". For example, in the example of "fragment example", in the "sea of people, the world" on the stage, the main character's dress and "look back", "smile" and other actions as if it were the same as the "sea of people", "smile" and other actions as if it were the same as the "sea of people", "smile" and other actions as if it were the same as the "sea of people". Smile" and other actions are like a close-up shot in front of us, alive and well. The following then write "we" between the interaction, write each other's sincerity for the people is also logical.
Two, depicting the scene, let the feelings seep into the heart. "All the scene is the language of love", our joys and sorrows, can be placed in the scene description (real scene virtual scene can be). By creating a scenic atmosphere, can quickly enhance the infectious force of the article. For example, "I run around on the ocean of life," the beginning of the article so: "In the blue sea, I do not know when to drift to a small guest - a leaf of duckweed. In the sometimes windy and sometimes cloudy sea, the days of the little duckweed can be imagined. Her body is suffering all the time, her mind is suffering all the time. She hoped every day that one day she could float to a peaceful harbor. The following story is a true record of the fate of such a leaf of floating weeds." The author was to recount his own misfortune, but first wrote the experience of floating in the sea, with the help of imagined scenery rendering the wavering life encounters, can be said to be creative and unique, vivid writing, touching to the depths.
Three, highlighting the doubts, so that the beginning of the spark. Or for everyone's recognized point of view, deliberately put forward the opposite relative views; or deliberately put forward a problem, triggering thinking; or the formation of conflict, resulting in suspense, stimulate the reader's mind and want to find the cause of the question. The beginning of such an article, the heartstrings. For example, "Another Exam" begins with: "After a hard battle, all the courses were finally finished, and the students were very relieved. However, the class teacher suddenly announced that there would be another test in the afternoon, and asked us to arrive at school before two o'clock in the afternoon. Ahem, what kind of nerve did the teacher have?" How's that? When you read this, aren't you eager to know what and how the test is going to be? This makes the article readable.
Four, presenting the sense, so that the philosophical idea of a show. With vivid, graphic forms of language, such as prose, simile, contrast, quote, etc., to express their thoughts on life, can receive to show the center and highlight the double effect of literary style. When you read at the beginning of the article, "the beauty of the sunrise with the sunrise, but also with the moon with the light; the beauty of the far north and the snow dance, but also in the south and the wind sings - the beauty of the world, everywhere, everywhere," such statements, your heart is not also for the When you hear such phrases as "Beauty is everywhere, everywhere", is your heart also moved by one of them? Do you have a new understanding of "beauty"? It seems that the use of language containing philosophical sentences for the beginning, really a good way to impress the people.
[Example]II
"You've grown up, you need to exercise more self-care!" The words my mom used to say to me rang in my ears again. I understood at once: excessive care, hold the child in the heart, the child does not get exercise, in fact, is a kind of harm to the child. Mom "let go" and "rest assured", so that I learned to take care of themselves, so that I am away from harm.
Selected from the "away from harm" (ending)
Chinese ancient times will be wonderful article ending compared to the "leopard tail", "banging the bell", is to show that the end of the To do concise and powerful, aftertaste. Writing practice tells us that to write an excellent article, less than a bright ending.
One of the highlights: deep win
After the article in front of the padding, momentum, the end of the bright author after refining the police statement (this statement is best in the author has been formulated before the pen to unify the whole text of the writing), with its meaning of the heavy lead to alert people, thought-provoking. To stay out of harm's way" as an example, the article sketches the mother refused to send "me" to the exam, wrote "I" see "and I'm about the same size of the girl" by the whole family concerned about but in a terrible situation. I saw the scene of "a girl about my size" being cared for by the whole family but in a terrible state, and then I made the above comments. This way of ending shows the author's rational thinking about life, and has the good effect of deepening the theme and inspiring people to think y.
Two, open heart: to love to win
Just because "feel the heart, not first to love" (Bai Juyi language), so the excellent author is always good at strong true feelings to pluck the reader's heartstrings, triggering the reader's thoughts, inspire readers to rich support of the emotional experience. Especially at the end, due to the previous emotional savings, should seize the last moment, outside the rich emotions, so that readers feel the tension of art in a rich emotional atmosphere. Full marks masterpiece "across the generation gap, I looked at you" article, narrative "I" on the father's love of misunderstanding, after writing "father for me to move the table" details - this is a Toward the aging man's heart of love for his son's feelings of natural outflow, the author dipped into the strong feelings, written touching. Then, the end wrote:
Maybe you haven't felt my awakening, maybe in your eyes I'm still that little boy who doesn't give a damn about you like ice and frost. But you must know that as long as the affection is continuous, the blood line is connected, I will certainly recognize the greatness of the father's love. The feelings may be distant, but no matter how wide the generation gap is, I will eventually look at you!
Here straight from the heart, as much as the release of strong feelings, let a person doubly understand the father's love, love of the father's affection for the surge and hot, touching.
Three, hanging questions to solve: to doubt to win
At the end of the article intentionally set up an unresolved issues or scenarios, leaving a blank, giving readers a broad imagination, stimulate their reading mood, so that they are in the endless imagination to think, to savor, this is a wonderful way to end. Exercise "rooster as an official record" compiled the experience of the rooster as an official: the subordinates in the chicken concentrated on egg-laying look at the chicken, like to accompany their own fun chicken. The end of the year assessment, but also reversed black and white on the report. I did not expect the master made such a decision:
After a few days, I and Xiaobai (i.e., accompanied by the dancers, the author's note) were invited to the master's presence, the heart of the beautiful. Why, the master's hand pinched a knife? Why? I've only been an official for a year, I don't want to die!
You, wise one, can tell me why?
At the end of the article, the author did not comment, but intentionally asked the reader realistic and urgent questions, so that can inspire people to think y, sobering.
Four, a steep turn to stop: to odd win
Not according to the usual logic of the storyline to arrange the end of things, the end of the introduction of the unexpected ending, when suddenly stopped, immediately back to the reins. This steep turn, abrupt end of the writing method, can give the reader a sense of novelty, so as to obtain the aesthetic enjoyment. Good work "know son is not like father", throughout the big money father monologue narrative style, praising his son to become a police officer's ideals, praising him born to be a police officer material: strong, agile, sociable. The two closing lines read:
Yo, there's a knock at the door, will you excuse me? Ho, speak of the devil. Two policemen, what's your emergency? What is it? Where are you going? Why don't we just talk about it here? We're not outsiders.
What? My son was crippled by a knife and is now squatting there?
Most of the article is the father's emotional praise for his son and his son's wrongdoing, but the end of the strange peaks, directly referring to his son's criminal behavior and sad fate, compared with the father's proud and complacent mentality, showing a strong sense of irony.