How to teach me how to write (spatial description) in my school?

Writing steps of spatial exposition: I have written this kind of article, and the following one is my composition (50 points and 45 points). Let me analyze it!

First of all, explain the geographical location at the beginning.

Example: There is a famous and beautiful No.12 middle school in Nanchang, on the banks of the Ganjiang River, in the center of the "one river and two banks" of the municipal government, and on Fusheng Road in Chaoyang District, west of Nanchang.

Second, emphasize that it is my school.

Exodus. That's my school.

Third, introduce the founding time, honor and area of the school.

Example: Nanchang No.12 Middle School was founded in 1957, and became a key construction middle school in Jiangxi Province in 2005. The campus covers an area of more than 30 mu, with neat layout and elegant environment.

Fourth, begin to introduce the face of the school, preferably from the school gate.

Example: The school gate design of No.12 Middle School is unique. Made of white marble slabs into a trapezoid, it is impressively engraved with "Nanchang No.12 Middle School" and "Nanchang No.12 Middle School". In the lower left corner of the school monument is a black lace iron gate more than 2 meters high, and on the left is an automatic telescopic door. Only open the iron gate in class and use the telescopic door after school.

From the school gate, introduce the way of sightseeing.

Walking past the school gate, you will see a scarlet modern office building. Further on is the front hall, with windows and bulletin boards on both sides. Excellent teachers, classmates and school songs are displayed in the window; The bulletin board is undoubtedly the arrangement of campus activities.

Sixth, introduce the main part of the school. If there is a sculpture, the big characters should explain the meaning.

Ex.: Passing through the front hall, there are three U-shaped teaching buildings behind, which are connected with the scarlet building, which can not help but remind people of the "four corners of the sky". The background color of the building is white, and the blue-green shading is inlaid with white porcelain, which is clean and generous; The eight red characters "Zhiyuan, Pinyou, Minsi and erudite" are near the middle teaching building. There is a bunch of winter jasmine under the figure, and then there is the central hall. There are railings above the third floor, which are beautiful and safe. In the center of the "Four Corners Sky" is a sculpture, and a silvery white statue stands on a red painted platform-holding a ball in one hand, which is the "hope" of all teachers and students. There are three art lamps and three ginkgo trees on the left and right sides of the statue, which adds a bit of artistic beauty and natural flavor to the modern teaching building.

7. Introduce the school carport (it is best to pass by). The playground is the key point, and there will be sports signs on the wall of the playground (this should also be written)

For example, there is a carport on the left side and a beautiful and quiet garden on the right side of "Sijiaotian". Pavilions, flower beds, bonsai, vines and bamboo are dotted among them. The retro circular arch is full of natural interest.

Through the central hall, you come to the playground. Five standard basketball courts are the stage for students to show their skills; Two table tennis tables, highlighting the charm of the national ball; The 400-meter plastic track is a new record after another; The competition on the football field is as fierce as a game. The sports wall is painted with sports events, and the sports equipment in the two places can be used for students to exercise. The high flag-raising platform stands at the top of the central axis of the playground. At the morning meeting every Monday, the national flag of Ran Ran will be raised in the passionate national anthem.

Eight, it is best to sum up the advantages of the school and show your determination to study hard at school.

Example: Elegant environment, rich learning atmosphere and healthy physical exercise will inspire students to keep forging ahead and work hard, representing the famous and beautiful Nanchang No.12 Middle School to reach the other side of knowledge.