snowflake
It's the little angel pulling the pillow
Shake off goose feathers
Scatter all over the floor
snowflake
Is the mother of the sky.
Cotton wool is leased to the earth.
So it can make a warm quilt.
snowflake
It's Santa Claus
A gift for us.
I wish every child health and happiness.
Characteristics of children's poetry:
(A) full of children's emotions
Lyricism is the fundamental way that poetry reflects life. Children's poetry is no exception. However, due to the particularity of its readers, it is required that the emotions of poetry must be expressed from the depths of children's hearts and vividly convey children's beautiful emotions, kind wishes and interesting feelings, so as to arouse the emotional power of young readers. For example, Ye Sheng's Xia Ge is a poem full of childlike passion, depicting the green in summer. The poet compared summer to a green child who loves to climb poles, and sincerely praised him for bringing us "how lovely green!" " On the surface, the poet is praising the green vitality of nature, but in fact, he is praising "students who are diligent in studying for the four modernizations of the motherland, …" These students are the real green scenery in summer. In this way, children can not only be influenced by beauty, but also increase their thirst for knowledge, love for life and sense of responsibility for society.
Children's emotions expressed in children's poems are often full of children's interests, which not only can make children get care and pleasure from them, but also can bring adult readers back to the scene of budding childlike innocence and relive their childhood dreams. For example, the work "Fourteen Years Old, Blue Harbor" (Knee Yu Xu), which won the "Chen Bochui Children's Literature Award", describes the children of this special age's understanding of love, worry and innocence, personality differences and desires in their hearts, as well as their ideals and adventurous spirit. Their emotional expression is natural, appropriate, vivid and interesting. There is such a poem: "It is brave to say that boys are brave, even if bullets fly, they don't blink;" It is really timid to say that girls are timid, and you can see bean worms jumping from a distance. I hope there will be more exclamation points to impress adults, but the question mark in my mind has never been straight. Weird questions often embarrass teachers. ..... "In his humorous description, the poet vented children's unique inner world and emotional activities, making people feel that this is what lively and happy children have, full of children's interest, beyond words.
It should be noted that children's interest in children's poetry is an internal factor in children's life, and only children's poets can find and vividly describe it, rather than a blunt and external component.
(B) children's rich imagination
Children are the most imaginative and associative. They always use their creative imagination to understand and explain everything in the world. In their imaginary poetic world, flowers will laugh, birds will sing, grass will jump and fish will say. Therefore, children's poetry must create a beautiful artistic conception that is in line with children's psychology and rich in imagination, show children's innocence and childlike interest, let children spread their imagination wings and feel the theme of poetry in a wonderful and colorful world. This requires children's poetry to talk to children's hearts in the imaginary world. For example, Shao Yanxiang's children's poem "Little Fairy Tale": "On the south side of the cloud,/in that distant place,/a leaf says: We want to/bloom like flowers. /A group of flowers said: We want to fly like birds. /A group of peacocks said: We should grow like trees. At the beginning of the poem, young readers are led from the reality to the imaginary "distant place", and the beautiful images such as "foliage flower", "small butterfly" and "peacock fir" are recreated in imagination, and rich reverie is launched. However, the poet's intention is not only here, but also to continue to spread the wings of imagination with the children and experience the poetic place from things and people. "Far Away" is "Daijia Village", "Flowers, butterflies and peacocks have all become little girls", and then it returns to reality from the imaginary world. In this reality, the beautiful image of Dai's little girl needs further association and aesthetic enjoyment.
(3) the idea is novel and ingenious
The emotion expressed in children's poems is far less profound than that expressed in adult poems, which is determined by children's emotional characteristics. How to express interest in a not very broad emotional level and create a unique expression effect? This mainly depends on the novelty and ingenuity of creativity. This conception, which depends on the accumulation of life and children's imagination, largely determines the artistic level of children's poetry. For example, Ren Rongrong's "Daddy's Teacher" is not very creative in the emotional excavation of similar themes, but it is still a model of similar themes. The secret is that the author has created a novel and ingenious conception mode and achieved a unique expression effect. Another example is Lan Shu's "Insect Birds": "I put my mother's washed socks on the rope one by one,/the rope became a multi-legged bug,/and crawled around in the sun. /I put my sister's handkerchief on the rope one by one,/The rope turned into a flock of egrets,/Flying in the breeze, flying. " Bold imagination on the basis of life, relying on the ingenious conception of this imagination, makes the ordinary life phenomenon become a kind of children's magic and infinite beauty.
(D) Simple and concise language
Poetry is the art of language. Profound thoughts and vivid images can only become poems if they are expressed in concise, vivid and vivid language. Children's poetry should provide excellent conditions for children to learn and master the language, so that children can learn the language in a beautiful language environment, enrich vocabulary, improve their ability to master and appreciate the language, and enjoy beauty at the same time. For example, in Liu Ruomin's Song of the Sea, the sea is sleeping: "The wind makes no noise,/the waves don't laugh. /Late at night,/the sea went to bed. /She is holding the bright moon,/She is carrying the stars. /That gentle tidal sound,/It's its sleeping snoring. " In a few words, the quiet and serene sea is presented to the readers, and the graceful gesture of the "mother" of the sea is vividly described with extremely accurate words such as "hug", "hug" and "hit" and anthropomorphic methods. Reciting such poems often can not only improve children's aesthetic ability, but also learn from them and improve children's ability to master and appreciate the language.
In the beautiful language of children's poetry, in addition to the accurate and appropriate tempering of words, the sound rhythm of poetry should be musical, that is, the rhyme of poetry should have aesthetic effect. Mr. Zhu Guangqian, an aesthetic expert, said: "The rhythm of sound is the most direct expression of emotion, and literary significance is the second." Artistic conception, which cannot be expressed by literary meaning, can often be expressed by sound rhythm. "("Selected Works of Zhu Guangqian's Aesthetic Literature Papers ")
The musicality of children's poetry is mainly manifested in rhyme and rhythm. Through the change of rhyme and the patchwork of sentence patterns, children of different ages are taken into account, and at the same time, the whole poem has a strong sense of music and rhythm, forming a neat aesthetic feeling. The younger the children, the more neat the rhyme of the children's poems they read. For example, "Little Bear Crossing the Bridge" (Jiang) for young children ends with the rhyme "Ao"; The distinct sense of rhythm in Wang An's "Di Li, Di Li" and Lu Bing's "Hole in the Chin" give people a bright feeling of reading poetry like singing, which makes children feel beautiful while excited.
(E) the artistic conception of childlike beauty
The combination of emotion and image constitutes the artistic conception of poetry. Children's poetry should also deliberately create artistic conception, aiming at creating an artistic conception of childish beauty. People often say "scene blending", that is, the feelings of poetry should be attached to images. Only by expressing the true children's feelings implicitly through images, rather than shouting them out abstractly, can this kind of children's poetry have a childlike and beautiful artistic conception and impress children. For example, Liu Ruomin's Moon: "The moon in the sky is round and round,/shining like a jade plate in the sea. /A group of fish swam over,/The jade plate broke into two or three pieces. /The fish ran away in fear,/all the way to the rock. /Looking back,/The moon is still round. " In the static beauty of the moon shining on the sea, through the dynamic addition of fish's "escape" and "look", a group of small fish are shaped in ingenious ideas, which are both fairy tale and childlike.
How to write children's poems;
Simile method-describing the characteristics of things, suitable for describing physical objects and natural scenery.
"A" seems to be a direct metaphor of "B"
For example:
cloud
Yun is like a busy painter.
Draw one picture after another in the sky
Cloud is like a naughty problem child.
Often forget to go home.
monkey
The monkey looks like a naughty clown.
Swing around the tree all day
Pull father Rong's beard for a while
Take out Aunt Peach's decorations later.
Second, the rich association of metaphor
Don't say figurative things, readers associate them themselves.
Example:
mother
Mom is an alarm clock.
Wake me up every morning.
Mom's hand
Mom's hand
You can put white rice.
Turn into a delicious meal
Third, the way of military parade-the level of performance scenery
tree
Trees in spring
It's a stage for flowers to do beauty contests.
Trees in summer
This is cicada's classroom.
Trees in autumn
It is the cradle of fruit sleep.
the tree in winter
This is a playground for wind racing.
dad
When dad is happy
Speak loudly
The ceiling will vibrate.
When dad is sad
Eyes glazed over.
Like a wooden head.
When dad is angry,
Like a volcanic eruption
Who touched it?
Whoever is unlucky is unlucky.
Fourth, parallelism-show the rhythm and deepen the impression
Describe a thing with the same word or the same sentence pattern.
Example:
wind
The wind is smiling.
Swing on the tree
Run a race on the grassland
Playing darts with leaves in the yard
smile
A smile is a flower that blooms on your face.
A smile is honey on your lips.
Smiles are sweeter than sugar.
Smiles smell better than flowers.
(In+ place+thing) (smile+noun+noun)
Smiling is more like yes than no.
Five, personification method-lively and lovely, interesting
Compare things with people and be a man.
For example: 1. Spring breeze makes flowers open their mouths and sing.
After the sun went to sleep, the light got up.
The moon shyly ran into the clouds and hid.
Dew saw the sun come out.
Just smiled happily.
soda
Shake hands with you
You are angry.
Please take off your hat.
You are angry.
Okay, clean, clean.
finish off the drink with one gulp
Look, you're still
God is not arrogant.
Six, copy the sound method-increase interest
Imitate the sound of everything in nature.
Example:
wind
The wind hates it.
Sneak up my skirt every time.
Then shout beside it.
Shame! Shame! Shame!
This really makes me angry.
Old grandmother's teeth
Time is really a prank.
Love has opened a hole in grandma's tooth.
The wind is more naughty.
Drill around in that cave
Shh! Shh! Shh!
The old grandmother didn't say anything for a long time
Let's go Let's go Let's go
Let us smile.
Seven, hypothesis method-write a beautiful hope and imagination.
Use "if" and "if" hypothetical sentences to express your hopes and imagination.
For example, if I change the wind direction,
If I become the wind
Just go to the place where mom works.
For mom.
Wipe sweat on your face
Blow dry one by one.
if
If I were a teacher.
I want to go to physical education class often.
In case the students are disappointed.
If I were dad,
I must give up drinking.
Lest mother often shed tears.
If I were God,
I want humans to laugh instead of crying.
because
Everyone laughed funny.
Eight, exaggeration-create special effects, deepen the impression.
Describe the quantity, time and behavior, modify and exaggerate the description.
Traffic police
The most powerful man in the world.
It's the traffic police.
Because he can do qigong.
Just push it gently with one hand
Dozens of cars won't move.
Nine, questioning method-stimulate interest and think deeply.
crab
Crab! Crab!
Why are you foaming at the mouth?
Have you just had lunch?
Brush your teeth and gargle?
Is it drooling, mom?
Want to eat the big apple in my hand?
wrinkle
The old man's face,
There are wrinkles;
On the sea,
There are also waves of wrinkles;
Is the sea getting old?
Ten, the overlapping method-the poem "heartbeat"-rhythm, pay attention to the rhythm should be consistent with emotion.
aigrette
Fly, fly.
Fly to the cow's back,
Rest your feet.
The wind is coming!
Fly, fly.
Fly to the field
carbonated water
Fly, fly.
Fly to straw
hide-and-seek
fan
The fan in grandma's hand,
Draw a bird
Grandma, ah, ah!
Birds fly and fly!
Grandma fell asleep,
The bird is asleep, too.
XI。 Story Poetry-Write a story into a poem.
Example:
grape trellis
Grape stand, tall,
Purple grapes are hung on it.
Purple grapes, big and round,
Tall, fragrant and sweet.
When the fox saw the jump,
I can't dance for a long time.
Rely on, unwilling,
Don't call yourself stupid,
This is sour grapes.
Call method-whether face to face or not, call the other party directly to make the content more profound and vivid.
Example:
New clothes
Mom!
The garden has changed.
Colorful and delicious spring clothes;
The trees have also changed.
Light green new clothes;
The distant mountain took off its gray coat,
Put on a light green shirt;
The grass is wearing a new green skirt, too.
Swing in the spring breeze!
Mom! Take a look,
They are all wearing new clothes!
Mom! People have changed into new clothes!
Thirteen, dialogue method-approachable, such as in the ear, easy to accept.
Example:
match
younger brother
Let's play games.
My sister is a teacher.
You are a student.
What about my sister?
Little sister is too young.
She can't do anything.
I think-
Let her be the principal.
Fourteen Contrast-highlighting the content and nature, including color contrast, shape contrast, action contrast, event contrast, character contrast and space contrast. ...
Private funds
Dad's private money,
Hide on the work hat;
Mom's private money,
Hiding under leather shoes;
My private money,
Hide in your stomach.
street lamp
sky
Street lamps are trees.
evening
It became one flower after another.